All Comments on 'Exploring New Territory'

I had the feel of a true story Keep it up

I thought your story was very good. It was believeable and exciting. I think you just need to take a bit more time with your story. The plot flowed too quickly for my liking. You don't need to rush with it. Two pages is a good length for a story IMHO.

I'll be looking for chapter two in the future.

Amazing story. Perfect blend of sweet and sexy, keep up the good work!