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Rachal-Caron Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/23/08

Hotter and Hotter

Loved it. Loved them all so far. Want to cum so bad.

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by ArmyAlex04/23/08

Can't wait for the next chapter

I can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing and great story.

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by Anonymous04/27/08

Delicious!

Briliant - they're getting better. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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by RachalCaron04/28/08

Feedback

Thanks for all the feedback - it's lovely to hear from you. And I do try to reply to everyone who emails me. Julie - you asked for a reply but didn't leave your email address. For those who enquired about more chapters, I think I maybe have another 3 to write and post. Thanks again.

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by smallncute06/29/08

Loved it

You write well Rachel, a style that Ifind easy to read.

Again the detail to the sex was awesome, and Sarah being present was also a lovely twist.

Your descriptions of the helpless you fee when restrained only added to the story.

well done thank you

Miranda

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by femmetrish12/17/08

Rach Continues to Discover New Erotic Pleasures

I too was delighted by Rach's arms being restrained and how much it enhanced her orgasm. She was equally aroused by having the very sexy Sarah masturbating herself to climax, while furtively watching Rach erupt into an intense orgasm of her own.

The author's sensual descriptions add much to the reader's erotic pleasure. Rach describes her arousal, "As she was running her finger around the full swell of my nipple, I could hardly breathe."

The arousal produced by Nikki rubbing her thighs against Rach's cunt was sensually described and something that caused me to become extremely aroused.

An excellent portrayal of Rachal's continuing journey, which leads her deeper into the world of eroticism.

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by Anonymous12/31/08

mmmm your writing makes me shiver!

mmmm Rachal this is such an exciting series. I felt like I was in the chair watching you! I luv it! Kara

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by Martiniman11/23/11

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

My swimming pool is extremely cold this time of year, but this story is getting so hot I'm thinking a cold swim right now is a good idea.

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