All Comments on 'Knees'

The images in this are so vivid. It's my favorite new poem today though I think it could benefit from a bit of shaping and editing. Just my opinion of course--it's really good writing though.

Your poem has been recommended today in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

and you call this most sensual poem non- erotic? You have it too good in life pall... enjoy the ride! And thanks for he hot poem.

The wind and other hinted at sensuous delights reveal such an image of innocent {or not} life's pleasures.