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by Angeline04/22/08

Just wonderful!

The images in this are so vivid. It's my favorite new poem today though I think it could benefit from a bit of shaping and editing. Just my opinion of course--it's really good writing though.

Your poem has been recommended today in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

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by KOLKORE04/22/08

No one can say no to a woman on a Vespa!

and you call this most sensual poem non- erotic? You have it too good in life pall... enjoy the ride! And thanks for he hot poem.

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by LeBroz04/23/08

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The wind and other hinted at sensuous delights reveal such an image of innocent {or not} life's pleasures.

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