All Comments on 'The Little Neighborhood Slut'

Please use an editor. It was actually a nice little story, but the typos trully killed it.

Would have been much better except for the terrible grammar and misplaced words. Have someone edit your work next time.

The story was decent but the grammar was very distracting.

The grammar, spelling and syntax errors distract from what is a pretty decent story.

Yes, I guess my Grammer was horrible. I was using one of those dictation software programs. I'll make sure I edit it alot better. Ya that was horrible grammer.

Thanks all

Godsh! I know your grammar isn't up to par, but that ending was intense.

Youi had far too many preliminaries. If I had that experience her vulva lips and pussy would have been so full of my cum that she would have had to have pissed herself with my spendings in her. And she would not have returned to college....she would be too busy changing diapers and feeding midnight feedings.

Please share more of your escapades with Sara...and her friend Autumn.

Great story, but use spell check and brush up on your grammar.

Very hot story wish I was your neighbour xo ;)