All Comments on 'Callgirl Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
don't know

he must really love her to just accept what she is doing and to have married her anyway. But it looks to me that, as long as she was keeping it away from him, her customers remained impersonal. What happened with Ian is totally different. He may have been her manager and regular lover, to show up like this and claim her in front of him, and, her just following Ian into the bedroom and making sure he

can clearly hear everything is making it very, very personal and shows him how she really thinks of him. How thoughtfull of her to bring him a blanket to sleep on the couch though. Let's say it would have been a great friendship with benefits, but to marry her ?? No thanks. G.Belgium.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
With the three main characters you describe many

types of mental illness. I really like the part about loving one person, being a total slut for another person, and being a prostitute and going off on trips with other men for sex. Yep one can really imagine what a lifestyle a couple would have. Can you imagine the phone call to her hsuband about supper. Sorry dear and I cant have supper with you tonight, yes I know it is your birthday, but I have five men waiting to gangbang me and I expect to be gone all night. No cant tomorrow, I am going out of town for five days to a convention with George, the owner of XYZ Company, I am to work the hospitality suite and fuck his customers. Maybe next Thursday we can have supper and go to bed together. By the way dear, dont forget to go to the doctors and get the new pills for the STD he found I have, and you need to be tested for HIV again it has been two months since your last checkup. Yes I do use condoms, but you know they are not perfect and sometimes they just break. Some guys wont or cant wear them so for and extra 100$ they go bareback. What yes I got that abortion last week. That was the tenth in the last two years now. Doctor said he doesnt think I can get pregnant again so we wont be able to have kids. Love you got to run.

Orion623Orion623almost 16 years ago
Very Interesting

I hope it won't be another 3 months before we see chapter 3.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunteralmost 16 years ago
Pathetic

Be serious, no one would ever put up with this shit. Sorry, just unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Chapters need to be submitted closer together

Otherwise, the flow and continuity is lost completely.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
just to sad

to be anything from erotic to lustful or horny

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
So - You Challenge For Self Cuck Of the Month

This isn't sick enough - yet. Now if Ian is black then you can raise and pay for black bastard babies.<P>

You can video her doing gang-bangs while fluffing up her next cocks (3) at a time.<P>

You will need to clean out her red swollen cunt of all the squirming squigly stringie clots of sperm before the next 3 fuck her.<P>

You will need to wear a cock cage of course and call her live in cock Sir. Most of all the pink slippers, frilly apron and fluffemup kneepads are expected next chapter.<P>

So sick wimp into self disrespect and male humiliation there is much for you to do to achieve Wimpish Self Cuck of the Month - if you want to be reviled by the 99.9% of readers.<P>

Practice Practice the subhuman sick shit till you get the cum down. --- Or get some help to regain your lost self respect - soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Finding Love

I enjoyed this story of these two people finding love in this situation. Please continue the story.

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioalmost 16 years ago
Reasonably well-written but really unbelievable.

I've heard of cases where a prostitute is married and finds a way to juggle her "profession" and her relationship with her husband, even cases where a husband is the manager/pimp! But starting a relationship with someone who puts others ahead of that relationship -- well, that's really putting quite a priority on work over marriage, isn't it? I think in a true love relationship, a woman needs to place her man first, if she loves him, and he her as well. Not in this case -- Rebbecca (April) obviously places Ian the pimp first! And wasted, drunk Ian can still fuck multiple times through the night? Must be on cocaine and a bunch of other shit to make that work. Either Rebbecca quite the business, or Ethan quits her -- a combination just can't work out in reality.

BazzzBazzzalmost 16 years ago
Well written

I like the storyline and the fact that you are moving deliberately with a verynice thoroughness. The subject matter is very good as well. I am looking forward to reading on.

bruce22bruce22almost 16 years ago
Powerful but scary

Sorry but I can not understand how our hero kept quiet.

At the minimum, he had to say to Ian, that this evening was

all ready planned out and Ian could come back some other time.<p>

The fact that she gives it to her pimp was not obvious before and his reaction was of a cuckold. Unfortunately I do not know if I want to continue reading.... I gave you five in the rating but I can not say that I like it!

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
I took my dick out and started jerking off.

He is a queer so that resulted in a 1*

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 5 years ago
Uh no

He's a pathetic dumb ass.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Cuck has a whorewife who says she is a callgirl. That's different.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He should have beat Ian to death while he slept and told her if she said anything, she was next... He's stupid!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Not just a cuck. A clueless moron. If you’re going to be with a whore at least be her pimp and take all the money.

Pinto931Pinto9318 months ago

What a wanker.

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