All Comments on 'The Long Road Back Ch. 01'

by sexygirl76

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You have developed the first chapter in great

detail. So much detail I doubt I will bother to read the rest. You can write and I would suggest you publish it in a book and avoid this site. Sixteen chapters is a bit long in the tooth.

kilcannonkilcannonalmost 16 years ago
Should be in print!

I agree with the last poster. If the next chapters are as well written as this one, it deserves to be in print! Can't wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
a beautiful piece

The story is great! There's a lot of tension and one can see that confrontation is on the way. Please, post again. If the story is already finished you can post 2-4 chapters at a time and post under novels/novellas (to possibly gain more readership). Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wonderful!

This is an excellent story. I really hope you post the rest of the chapters...and soon! I can't wait to read them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
i like it

i really liked ur story and waiting for the rest

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I want more of this one

This has the makings of one of the great ones. Don't keep it to yourself; share it.

Ch 01 does just what it's supposed to do. It pulls me in and makes me want more.

So get to it! Publish the rest!

Thanks

Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very good

I liked what I have read so far. Looking forward for the rest.

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