by Julia_Again
Mmm, what a lovely encounter that was!
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doesn't something like that ever happen to me?
A lovely piece of writing but oh so short - but then again who knows who you might run into in the next couple of weeks?
After all, we've got to find out why your dark-haired companion felt so free with you....
OK, I know it's a fragment, but I think there are enough doors still open to develop it further.
Optimsitically,
R.
Lovely short piece full of pace, just like the impromptu meeting. I hope the two characters meet again this time to share a mutual experience. So many questions, so many opportunities to please.