All Comments on 'How do I End the Perfect Pussy ?'

hey DS57, i really think that with the way Waylon has been written into the story that there definately needs to be a confrontation with Kenni and Harley so i reckon that the mental hosipital idea is the way to go. I feel that the characters Kenni and Harley would need to have some closure before they could comfortably move forward. Na scratch that i reckon they deserve some closure from him.

You should continue the story at least until they have children. Then you could kind of let time pass and give one of their children his/her own story. As for Waylon, I think he needs to pay for his crime. He shot his brother, harrassed Keni and beat up at least one other female near death. He should get a pretty good beating himself and then hauled off to prison. You could possibly give him his own story when he gets released where he comes to terms with his actions and yes, find a good woman that will kick his ass when he gets out of line. I hope I've been a little helpful!

This family has strong roots in pride and honor. Even in the worst of times ancestory honor surfaces. Wayland lost himself, let him be accountable to his mind and soul, let him heal. Peace and closure to Harley and Keni. Pregancy does help heal wounds don't you think??? And of course there has to be a strong minded nurse somewhere along the way to kick Wayland's ass into line. Give this family PRIDE AND HONOR. Love heals wounds. Can these three find that love in lost times.

1)I think ending it with the wedding of Keni and Harley would be perfect. At that point, Waylon should have been dealt with (see point 2). Personally I don't want to see Keni pregnant just yet, I'd much rather see her get some more formal education, let her make some more experiences of what her life is about. Not just caring for and looking after other people.

2) My opinion is that Waylon must be dealt with in a permanent fashion, preferably legally. He is not just a bad boy who will be reformed by the love of a woman, he is a psycho stalker, a rapist, and he's not above killing people who he thinks are in his way. Do you really think a person like that can be rehabilitated? I don't. And please don't make him come back and target someone else (the kids?). That would make the story so dystopian, IMO.

This was a wonderful story, I hope we'll see more from you in the future!

I have really enjoyed the story and agree with the previous comments of seeing Keni grow and mature. We know there will be a happily ever after for Keni and Harley, it might be best to start a story line with one of their adult children that catches us up on how their life together has been. As for Waylon, do you seriously think he can be helped, he has gone way past sibling rivalry. I would not want his death on Harley or Keni's hands, but he does need to go away for a while, whether he reforms and atones is the author's privilege.