by hemo101
This piece has the same character names as another story on Literotica, with a very, very similar ending. Don't waste the readers' time or your own time by repackaging the same story. Just terrible...
Well this story was hot, but then i think that the ending was well out of contex and totally a cool down. i think that you should leave subjects like that alone or at least out of erotic lit.
Needs a sequel where Heli has her payback against Luisa. Sexy story though.