All Comments on 'Madame President'

by hemo101

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Very stupid story

Had promise but just degraded from the srart

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
What was this?

This piece has the same character names as another story on Literotica, with a very, very similar ending. Don't waste the readers' time or your own time by repackaging the same story. Just terrible...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Well...

Well this story was hot, but then i think that the ending was well out of contex and totally a cool down. i think that you should leave subjects like that alone or at least out of erotic lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Needs a sequel

Needs a sequel where Heli has her payback against Luisa. Sexy story though.

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