All Comments on 'The Joys of Polyamory'

I have heard of this type of thing before but have never seen a story about it. Sounds good to me if it's good for them.

There has to be more to this story. I liked it and want to hear more.

Sounds like a King David decisiom may have to be rendered on his DICK!

in the future, the two kids grow up to be lovers, that would be so hot

The story was terrific - but I am sure the author was a male - when will men do some research on Pregnant women - MILK does not come into the breasts until about 1/2 days after the birth of the baby - not before - colustrom comes in about 2/3 days before but that is only a watery whey fluid - so gentlemen - please get your facts straight - I think I know a little about this - I am the mother of 7 and also a 3 certificate Nursing Sister (including Obstetrics) thank you - Jena121

Yes, I am definitely male. That (plus a li'l more about me) is in my Lit profile. Lactation starting after baby's birth may (possibly invariably) have been your experience as a mother & as a nurse, but I have heard on one hand of women lactating by month 6 or so (induced possibly by spouse/partner frequently sucking on breasts?) & on the other hand of women who have trouble nursing their new babies. This story, like almost all my others, is totally fiction & not meant to reflect real life. But thank you for reading it.

Idea was hot certainly. But the story was too short. if only you had explored their life.

I would have put the story in GROUP since it obviously was more than sex between two adults. I would have rated the story higher if there was more chacter construction. Mom is a horney woman who seems to lactate well. Daughter is a lot like Mom. Why should I care about them at all? Where was Dad? Why was Mom alone raising the daughter? Why did they decide to both get pregnant on the honeymoon? Was he even part of the discussion before the decision to get pregnant? The story was weak...IMHO

How lucky you were, except that you probably had to start changing two diapers every so often instead of just one. You must have been drained all the time.....

IF THIS WAS EVERY TRUE... LUCKY BASTARD

(Not King David. King Solomon.)

The main thing wrong with this is that there's no emotion or feeling of the erotic in your words. He fucks Mrs. X. Whatever. But it's your job to show, not say. How DID they feel? Other than that they're red necks, we don't know much about them. They just seem like cardboard cutouts who like to fuck and make brain-challenged monsters who'll be on probation after they get out of juvie hall.

He gets his bitch mother-in-law pregnant. He should just shoot himself now!

Mr. anonymous can take a

bath with a blow dryer!

I think it was a damn hot story.

I have heard so many stories of

son-inlaws and mother-inlaws

who go after each other like cats

an dogs. what a shame. To have

a great wife and a lovely older

woman who is her mom, yeah I

can go for that.

not much tease, not much sex. could have been a good story - but needed more background, better sex scenes, etc. story needs a lot more development

Just found this story. Meh...Dry as toast and, if we (the reader/audience) take the sex action at face value - neither of these two women ever achieved orgasm. Poor girls!

Reminds me of that billboard…

It was average, it didn't make me wet in my pants. But if u were to write about the wife and mother in law getting pregnant for a big black cock or some gangbang then it would have me wetting

That kind of relationship will never work

Silly and unrealistic storyline

Few get to enjoy it cause it doesn't work and others don't even want that kind of relationship a real man would only be with just 1 woman he wouldn't look elsewhere just like a true woman wouldn't look elsewhere