This story is hot!!! I enjoy how you are building up the characters, but I am not to sure about how you keep going back to the fact about how the people from the church would be shocked if they could see her now. You mentioned that several times. Other than that, I can hardly wait for the next installment.
You are a great porn writer. I hope grandpa cuckold'.s his grandson and gets Allison pregnant. Everyone of your stories has been erotic. Incest and pregnancy are best. Please continue all of your stories and do not wait too long to publish.
Once again you get it right, another great story, or series i hope. When will you be finishing "Hot girl leaves the trailer park". Please finish your stories.
Can't wait for more Chapters! On the edge waiting for the next installment; ready to explode after a great read.
And I'm REALLY looking forward to the sequel!
Why haven't I found Shoguy's contributions until now?
These are fantastic stories! We have a big void on this site: stories of old guys outperforming young guys and taking their women. The fact that the girls in Shoguys stories fall for cynical old badguys adds to the thrill. Some people hate stories like that: please ignore them!
Now, more grandpa please. I'm really looking forward to read more about this geriatric alphamales cuckolding of his grandson.
Give these characters some names and the story becomes an easier read. Love the story itself.
man---ive been reading the most incredible stories you write and now Im going back to old stories you wrote....dude---chick--whatever the fuck you are---you are fucking the best writer on this site!!!! bar fucking none!!!
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