All Comments on 'Trip to Village'

Marvellous... such a slow and steady build up... great work

Dear MPSAAB please complete the story. Built up is like slow poison. I donot want to die before reading the complete story.

makemehappy

but what about the ending

Hi Mpsaab

please complte the story

iam waiting for it from a long time

Its a wonderful story with an excellent background which has been built by the writer very patiently and erotically... But the sad part is the writer has failed to complete the story if possible don't let your effort to b wasted like this.... hopefully u will do the needful

This story has a huge fan following at freesexyindians and exbii.. They are dying to read the rest of this story.. Please complete the story...

THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. .

STIL NO SEX..BUT THE WRITING AND CONVERSATION MADE ME CUM MANY TIMES..

PLEASE PROCEED IN THE SAME MANNER...ANS LET SEX HAPPEN LATELY..MAKE IT A LONG STORY

PLZZZZZZZZZZZ COMPLETE IT..IM DYING TO READ IT

Why did u leave this story unfinished?

Why did u leave this story unfinished?

Why did u leave this story unfinished?

plz finish the story

finish the story please...

Amazing build up. Best one till date. The author should have completed the story.

Dont think mpsaab is the author of this story. He must have copied this story

If any of you guys know where to find the rest of the story leave an adress

Hope to see the next part real soon......

let us know the actual author and the location of actual story

Please rewrite the Hindi Parts in English It defeats the story if we cant read the salient conversations from the women

This is very interesting.. please resume..

awesome stuff

release the second part of the story. Waiting eagerly to read what's going to happen next

Please complete the story, its engaging.

it is not full story

I gave up after the first few pages. The story is incomprehensible if you're not bilingual.

It is a good story but it is incomplete. If the story was complete it would have many parts and the story can be very popular as the story and characters are good. But i dont think the author is active now. Btw im very disappointed that the story is not completed and that too he stopped in the main part.