All Comments on 'Office Policy'

what the hell is this...you have a long way to go as a writer...the story is way too short and not very interesting so far...you need to be able to capture peoples mind and imagination very quickly...you better head back to the drawing board...

If there aint no sex. . . I'm gone!

i don't agree with the other comments, save perhaps that it is a bit short. but you've set a good scene, and your ideas are fresh too.

This is a good beginning. And for those who are disappointed that there isn't any sex...the intro clearly states there won't be any sex in this chapter.

I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

where is the rest of it?

Where is the rest of the story??