All Comments on 'Deal 'Em!!'

More graphic text needed to paint the pictures!

Thanks for writing.

Should have been some description when the sister lost all her clothes though. I had to reread to realize she was naked. Also would have created more tension with a description of the naked sister.

I greatly enjoyed a bit of amusement along with my fave literotica; brother sister incest! Keep up the good work! Jim

touching, I thot he would cum in her, causse he allways screwed things up.

no background no character development and no end all equal another waste of time from bassbelly.

I've read several of your stories so far. You do a great job of writing hot. short stories, with a beginning, middle, and end...which keep me....very interested.

Reminds me of teen years with my sister

please continue bro/sis love is the purest love. please keep them exclusive.