All Comments on 'Naughty Nieces'

Not a bad story at all. Well written. Just a little short. But there must be a lot more to cum.lol I got the feeling that Uncle has watched his nieces from the boathouse, probably jacked off while he did. Might not have fucked them but sure would like to. Maybe he will.

Good fucking action, but could probably have used a little more tension on the lead-in to it. Brain agreed to risk his marriage and his life fucking a VTers daughter way too quickly, and Connie offer came somewhat out of the blue.

A little more teasing and tension will make for a better story when you get around to writing Part II, when he nails Bonnie with Connie watching.

Can't wait

Got to the goodies far too quickly.

2 stars