by lryans
A good enough story but there are several ways it vould have been a lot better for instance "fuckhole",the tense does nor help either. I totally disagree with the idea that ereotica is to give someone an orgasm,no doubt some does ,but do you see people looking at erotic art with either an erection or trying to get their hands in their panties[women that is],you dont do you.
a good story until the selfish whore stop the son from getting off.
I hate stories written as if speaking to someone. "You walked in." or "You grabbed my ass". All that 'You' stuff ruins it for me. But that's just a personal preference. Most probably enjoy stories written that way.
Her dominance and your submissiveness to it do make the story interesting and denial perversely delicious. Improvements in grammatical tense or person would make it better.
i disagree with the others. i found it very good, only a little too short for my taste.
anyway, 5 stars deserved
I love the premise of this story....denial on the edge makes the next orgasm so much better!
I love to edge and keep myself from cumming. I am interested in orgasm denial and submissive domination. So, this story was fun to read and touch my erection to the point it almost burst. Spurting my semen too soon would be so unrewarding. Thanks.
A PERFECT Mommy son story. Needs more chapters with constant denial.
Although still Pretty Hot I was kind of Expecting some CBT or some Ballbusting at least to be Perfectly Honest, but still Pretty Hot as I have said.