All Comments on 'Worlds Colliding Ch. 06'

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UnknownfanUnknownfanover 15 years ago
Brilliant

What an excellent story!

I don't know why you were doubting your crossover skills, you wrote that story wonderously. The transition was very smooth.

Your story didn't feel forcefully restricted like a bad crossover, where the crossing over parties are too afraid to have any inconsistencies or to lose face that no actual plot was formed.

In this story, it almost felt like the first series, 101, was a dedicated intro to this series.

I do have a question though - where are the stories of the association located? I can't find them under your name.

Wonderful job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautifully written, but...

...the wrong team won. Those of us who desire to be mind controlled wish the mind controllers to triumph!

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