by bisexualsmoker
I'm looking forward to more of this. It's great to have a sub story where submissiveness isn't overstated, where it feels very natural. I also like the oozing fetish content; xd, androgyny, smoking, bare feet... Keep it up, B/SSm, it's great to hear your voice!
Loved it! Very erotic, very earthy, very real to those of us who live this lifestyle. Especially like the references to bare feet in your two stories so far. Keep writing and keep it own and dirty!
I love the way you make it all come true, and bring me into your world. Thanks for a great, hot, smoking story!
God but your stories so far are hot. Please keep writing in this genre
Not my 'bag' so to speak, but seriously erotic writing. I'm going to try the palming thing next opportunity I get!
I'd just like to thank sr71plt for doing
the editing.He's also one of my favorite authors
on Literotica as well.His help was invaluable.
I especially enjoyed the smoking aspect of this chapter. Smoking and sex seem to go together quite naturally, IMO.