All Comments on 'Church Ladies'

by mikec1010

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
very sweet

Very nice story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
wonderful story

Unlike many it was very believable. I liked the way you lead into the 2 women discussing lesbian sex. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
My neighbors

growing up in my neighborhood, the house next door was the parsonage. Everyother day, the same lady would show up and enter, and four hours later or so, she would leave. Never thought anything, since I was only 8 or 9 at the time, but, eight years later, found out she was making love to some of the ladies in the neighborhood. Was wonderful to jack off too.......She was gorgeous.

mikec1010mikec1010over 15 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for all the kind words. I write these stories with you in mind and nothing makes me feel better than knowing the readers enjoy my stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Compliments About THIS Story???

You must have written the compliments for this story yourself, since I can't believe ANYONE ELSE could have enjoyed this pathetic excuse for erotica!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I'm not the author...

but I liked this story. It was a believable situation to get into. Being a former church girl, I wish I had been able to seduce more of my friends like that. I did do it once, and it was good. Brings back good memories.

lance gtlance gtover 14 years ago
Had Potential....

Your story had a good idea to work on, but you rushed it through and didn't elaborate a build up, the way real women would have done it. It seems to end up nothing more than an excuse for sex and a poor one at that. Try harder next time to develop your characters and the set up scenario. Inner feelings and emotions are the basis for a reader's involvement to enjoy the character and the events that follow. Didn't give you a zero, because you do have potential here and hope your new works will improve. Lance

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
sex and passion are great

Just show that if you are open you can enjoy life to it's fullest.

kittencougarkittencougarover 11 years ago
Short and sweet

I think this story is very believable. The conversation leading up to the sex was sweet and much what I would imagine would happen between two beginners. Good first try. Would like more development on the sexual side of it, but I enjoyed it.

gotranegotranealmost 11 years ago
A Little Rushed

A bit of hurry involved, especially in the disrobing of each other, but still a great little story. Please continue to let it unfold.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
should have describe the pretty lingerie they were taking off sounds very real 2 this man

church ladies need satisfaction also they are real people with dumb husbands

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
SUE?

Who is "Sue", mentioned early on?

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Incomplete

The last thought from Lisa, implies theirs a different life for her an Jean. That said you have at least 1 maybe 2 more stories.

Looking forward to reading more.😅😘😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ehhhh....

Always a good premise, but I feel there should be more conflicted feelings and hesitation involved. These two just dive right in, but the steamy part should be what leads up to it.

kaleonanikaleonaniover 2 years ago

Sensuality and intimacy is the catalyst for an enticing experience most especially between two women. It's too bad most women won't experience it yet they would engage in a bachelorette type of atmosphere with dude's swinging their dick's in their faces while they apply vacuum.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Everyone is entitled to their sexual preferences. Not all women want to experiment with other women.

Respect is a two way street.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Kaleonani:

"Sensuality and intimacy is the catalyst for an enticing experience most especially between two women. It's too bad most women won't experience it yet they would engage in a bachelorette type of atmosphere with dude's swinging their dick's in their faces while they apply vacuum."

Well not everyone is a lesbian or for that matter a man hater. Every chance you get always the same man hating views. If a guy mistreated you; get help stop hating.

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