All Comments on 'Used Ch. 04'

Please no breaks - you can leave us hanging! GREAT WORK AS USUAL BTW!

you have inspired me to start my own erotic lit writing so i look forward to seeing and learning more

GAT DAMN IT. Im sitting here with tears in my eyes. WOW just WOW I wanted a happy ending damn it wheres the happy ending???

So where is mom is she dead or living somewhere else. Im glad we caught a glism of why Jamie was the way she was. Her dad was and still is a ass.

Unless the next story is about Dax Ryan's brother, skip it and give me my happy ending.

This was a great story that was supposed to be about sex but feelings got involved. I am glad that she had closure with him. I want to read more about her parents and sister. Also did his dad ever find love if no, then maybe his dad and her mother can get together. I am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful stories. Thanks

Divisionred

I will be waiting with bated breath for the next installment of jamie and nate's story. This was just amazing...keep up the good work.

Loved it! Can't wait to see where this goes!

OMG!!! This is not what I was expecting. Yet, it was fabulous! This Harlow-Kincaid game is stuff novels are made of! It's great to know that it ain't over, 'til it's over! Keep up the great work!

I'm glad you ended it this way. It's poignant and very realistic. After all, they've graduated from college and will be leading separate lives. You can either write a short epilogue, or create a new series when they are "older and wiser". Thanks for writing and good luck with your other stories.

Let me just say wow.

This is so close to the best chapter I've ever read from any series. And that's a big statement.

I still want my happy ending though. And no cop out shit either. Together they must be. Or else ;-) <3 αιηє

You have got to write more of this story soon! I loved it, loved it, loved it! Thanks so much for sharing your stories with us.

You have to continue this....its like a drug for me.....

This chapter is a masterpiece. This may sound awfully rude but...most of the other writers here need to come read your work and LEARN. There is no denying it, they need to be taught at the feet of a master.

Does that sound corny? LOL! Sorry but when I am happy I get poetic. Your story makes me happy. Finit.

Oh my...this is SOOOO good!

this brought tears to my eyes. so sad and yet very honest.

I've read this before, but reading it again now is just as good and heart breaking! very well written. kudos.

LOVED IT!!!!

Yet so touching arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh!

My second time reading this. I first read it about two years ago. Now, I'm reading it again, and I'm sittin' here about to cry. Dang!