All Comments on 'A Ride With Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Warm, Wet, Wonderful

You touched my every sense:

Felt your subtle, teasing, tongue and hands

Smelt your squeaky clean, and foaming glands;

Touched your pouting nipples, stroked your hardened clit

Heard your moans; your mocking laughter gave me a fit

Watched you run; your dripping juices-spattered dress

Wrinkled into your undulating ass I clutched while in duress

I dived into your honeycomb to taste the heady nectar rare

I scream in fired passion as you bounced and flung me where All thoughts are lost and only heaving sighs remain

And extasy gives way to affection mixed with passion's pain

justjohn1013justjohn1013almost 16 years ago
Seems so real

It's almost as if I were right there in the car, in the restaurant, feeling the warm, wet flesh in my own fingers. I love the teasing and toying, holding off on the prize 'til the very end.

daryl3daryl3about 13 years ago
I wonder...

if this is written from imagination or ..... ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

While frantic, animal sex is can be overwhelmingly delicious, in most instances, for me, it's all about the repetitious, teasing journey. This story reminds me of my high school days when you could drive home from the movies the short way on the freeway or the long way along a two-lane highway...the latter being the journey of choice for me! J

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Simply, kudos !!

Well done. Flowed nicely. Great interpersonal depth of pace, and need.

Thanks Don

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