All Comments on 'Jason's Story Ch. 14'

THIS WHORE CHEATS ON HER HUSBAND AND GETS KNOCKED UP AND HER HUSBAND GETS THE WORSE END BY BEING IN A CAR ACCIDENT AND ENDING UP IN ICU; NO I THINKS IT WOULD BE SELF-SERVING IF THE BITCH WIFE WOULD SUFFER!!! THE CARING HUSBAND WAS STUCK WITH A LYING, CHEATING WHORE!!!!!!!!!!

Great story. About life. Shyt happens. Jesus was the only man who was perfect so I suggest you get your head out of your ass and act like a human being who has faults just like the rest of us. Now on to the story! Yay! It was great! I'm kinda mad that Brett's getting better, I definitely want to see Jason and Nigha together. Keep going!

Worthless to immature people who havent experianced the joy of comming through something with more than just bitterness. In life things happen and it's how we handle the situation that shows our charachter,our strengths and also our weaknesses. I love this story, the charecters are real with weakneses and strengths that makes it a gripping tale. Well Done!

this story sucks because this bitch have the nerve to be in a good marriage but goes and fucks her co worker and gets knocked up and act likes she doesnt know whose the babies father i mean you have been fucking your husband for more than a decade and did not end up preggers and you fuck some hott studd a couple of times without protection and you tell me you still think it has a 50/50 chance to be your husband! bitch please

I loved your story!! People make mistakes and wrong judgments all the time. That doesn't mean that they don't still feel the love or hate that they do. Not to mention that some people do love more than one person. Who's to say there is only one great love out there for you? It just so happens that Nigha found hers in overlapping time.

Those that seem to dislike this story so much have still read the story up till now. I'd say they're hooked on the drama whether they admit it or not. So even what though they say is negative, it is still a testament to your great writing that they are so passionate about how they feel.

Keep up the great (and hot!!) work.

What mother would ever talk to her daughter about screwing around on her father like this slut did. Once a slut always a slut.

On the actual story: Just a little predictable. The reader was fairly certain that Nigha would awaken with Jason @ her side. For this and this only I rated the submission a 75.

For everyone who is up in arms about the affair between Jason and Nigha...did you REALLY expect to have virgins pure as the driven snow on L-I-T-E-R-O-T-I-C-A? If you are that upset about Nigha being a "whore" and messing up her relationship with a good husband, then you're reading the wrong website. Morality is out the window on this website. If you're going to crucify the author for the affair, then crucify EVERY OTHER AUTHOR on the website for premarital sex, incest, rape, and the list goes on. Remember where you're reading before casting irrational judgment on the author. LW

You have got to be fuckn kidding me? Your on a SEX SITE leaving comments like that? Do you have a virus in your computer and thought you were reading a story on CNN? Give me a freakn break. This is the 14th chapter, 14th not 1st, where the hell did you expect this story to go?

Ok, now on to the story, I really thought he was going to kick the bucket after the parents got there, so you got me on that one. Very good work kit, keep them coming.

Jeez, people can get so touchy. While I don't like the way that the two main characters got together (cheating just sucks in general) people have to realize that it's just a STORY. A work of fiction. Yes, things like this happen in real life and that blows. But to crucify an author for writing this material is completely ridic. Yes, what Jason and Nigha are doing to Brett is wrong. The dude seems pretty decent. But no matter how ELK writes the story, someone is bound to get hurt, and seeing how the title of the series is called JASON'S STORY I can only guess who the winning guy will be. That's just the way the cookie crumbles. Look at the story for the way that it is written. It is well done. If you don't agree with the material, that's fine. Leave a critical comment if you wish. But there's no need to get that upset. After all, it's just a story.

A good story will elicit some form of emotion from a reader. It can be good or bad… But it’s just a story. The purpose of a story is to entertain. This story has certainly done that. Forget the Haters EroticLitKitty.

when b4rett wakes up he needs to be made aware that his wife had kids by someone else....he needs to then sue his wife for divorce then sue jason for child payments and money he has lost in thinking his kids were his when they were some other bastards...jason as far as im concerned would get nigha hands down as why would brett want a cheating whore...id say once he gets everything he and his wife owned and jason paid him for the birt of kids that werent his plus damages say a cpl hundred thyousand dollars...just to make sure he really has to work to raise his bastard kids ....after brett gets his money then nigha and jason can raise their sorry bastard kids....brett deserves much better that her anyway....as far as i would be concerned brett wouldnt hurt a bit to get rid of a bitch like her ....he deserves a wife that loves him for him and will have his kids instead of some assholes ....brett deserves a wife not a whore ...good riddance to bad rubbish...then jason can worry about who she will cheat on him with as we all know she will at some point in time ....then mayber he can raise anothers mans kids as nigha was trying to make brett do ...good thing for the accident so now brett will know and can rid himself of the bitch...she says she worries ...no she doesnt its just her guilty conciounce

Wow, I have been waiting for this installment for a while, and I am NOT disappointed. You're still doing your magic with words!

I've read some of the comments ( or shall I say insults?) from some of the readers, and clearly they know nothing about love and life, and how things get complicated sometimes.This is a beautiful story, beautifully written: Keep going!

Thanks for writing another installment. We all know that opinions are like assholes everyone has one and some are just assholes. Other readers have obviously not been in the situation of loving one man while being married to another and still loving that person as well. Since some of the reader do not seem to be able to tell fiction for reality perhaps those readers should not be reading on this site. I loved your story have been a faithful reader from the beginning. Have to keep reminding the haters that is just a story and if you dont like it dont read it. No need to leave hate comments, just go about your business and forget you read the story. Keep going, love your style of writing.

A note from the author

Okay, okay (picture me with my hands up) Nigha is a cheater, Jason is a stalker/homewrecker, Brett is an innocent; and the twins are Jason's. It used to bother me when I would read some of the comments/insults that have been posted about this chapter in particular, but there's something about these that just made me chuckle. Like the one where her Mom is a whore because she talks about cheating on her husband...funny; she never mentions cheating on her husband, only understanding how Nigha could be so attracted to Jason while still being in a loving marriage. Then there was the diotribe about filing for divorce, suing for custody, blah, blah, blah...if I didn't make it clear before; this story is not a diary or second hand account of actual events...it's FICTION.

What really made me laugh about all of this was the simple fact that this chapter has ZERO sex in it ;-) I could've understood more (well, not really) the morality police posting comments when they were having sex in the copy room, for the solid week that they were in Miami, or the location that would make me beat the shit out of my husband if he ever cheated there; the bed she shared with her spouse. Things that make you go hmmmm!

In closing (and to get out of my own diotribe), I didn't feel the need to defend myself because my loyal readers (and some great Anonymous friends ;-) understood and had my back from day 1 and I love you guys!

Keep reading!

Kitty

Ive been reading your stories for a while and am so happy you continued them....You a amazing writer and i do like how you make your characters come alive with emotion and realistic feelings that would happen...makes it so much better to read....then these boring flat stories just about sex...THANK YOU FOR ACTUALLY WRITING I STORY WORTH READING.....I CAN WAIT TO SEE WHAT ELSE IN STORE.....

Ive been reading your stories for a while and am so happy you continued them....You a amazing writer and i do like how you make your characters come alive with emotion and realistic feelings that would happen...makes it so much better to read....then these boring flat stories just about sex...THANK YOU FOR ACTUALLY WRITING I STORY WORTH READING.....I CAN WAIT TO SEE WHAT ELSE IN STORE.....

This series is amazing and i can't wait for the next installment

Since I actually read your story all the way through I know where it most likely will end up. Like most romantic stories it's all about the journey. I'm just glad you came back to the story and I can't wait to see how the rest of it goes.

I absolutely love this story, because that is all it is a story. You can choose to like it or not, if not move on to another story to bash.

WCD

I love this story so far. Love everything about it.....

I hope you finish this story. I keep checking every so often to see if I missed the next installment, but I see that I haven't. Good writing, good story, but the lenght between submissions makes it difficult to remember the details.

I'm dying from reading these comments!! Kitty, you done gone and done it! Got these people on fiya!!! LOL!

Personally, I'm enjoying...believe that! AND I'm hoping for a happy ending!

This is my second time reading this series, and I am loving it again. I didn't get the read the comments the first time because I was on mobile. I will say this you know that your story is good when it evokes so many emotions in its readers. Keep up the good work Kitty!!!

...is hilarious and it was SO fitting you had Jason be the one Nigha awoke to. I knew that dream he had would be prophetic!

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