All Comments on 'Alternative Action'

.. but otherwise, well written! Little more build-up, little more description, and you'd have earned my 100%er. I've read most of your "volumes" of stuff and like your style. :)

Definitely could have used a "bit" more description on the characters, but it was well written. And, short is what I like to read!

Quite good. I was somewhat confused at points as to positions -- were they doing is missionary, doggie, she on top? I'll echo what the others said -- needs a few more descriptions, but otherwise a solid piece of erotica.

Poor attention to details. They had only been dating for a few weeks, yet he already has a nickname for her time of the month? And then, okay, they've had anal twice already but then you mention they hadn't done it in awhile?