- Interracial Love
- Only You Ch. 02
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All Comments on 'Only You Ch. 02'
by nerd4music
- 26 Comments
Anonymousalmost 16 years agofucking fantastic. great story. gorgeous man. please keep them coming.
hotcocoa6904almost 16 years agoI think that this might be my favorite story of yours yet!!! This was freaking awesome and I hope you post the next chapter soon!!!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoThat was Great, Hot, Sexy....I want my very own Derek. He is just too much and i can't wait to see what happens next with him and Teagan. I can already see the drama that will be headiing their way with him having a girlfriend and all these women that like him. But i want to see all the great times they will have together, before the drama unfolds. Great work.
mysticfox19almost 16 years agoI don't even now what to say that this is a great story! I was almost late to class because I had to read the chapter twice. It's that good!! I want one of each of these men in your series. They're soooo sexy!!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoyour stories are so awesome!!! I just love your stories- hurry up with the next chapter willya
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI like the fact that Tegan is so innoncent and Derek really likes her to but he has to many woman that he is currently involved with Carrie and Lottie and they both sound crazy as hell. It's nice to get an update of the other members of this crazy crew and Carrie needs to get her own life...what a BIOTCH she is. Thanks
SecretFantasy69almost 16 years agoGreat. Awesome. Wonderful. Beautiful. Loved it. More. Thanks. ;-)
cinnamon_kisses12almost 16 years agoI'm so in love with this story! I'm anxious to see things get started!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agois so sexy
i need to find myself one of those..
absolutely loving this though =]
+ Carrie is such a damn bitch
well done XD
Anonymousover 15 years agoevery white guy was like Derek Ryan. So incredibly hot and confident. Although he does have too many girls at the moment. Also, I love love love Tegan. And I'm not just saying that because she's like me. Such a great story.
Also, love the music elements in all your stories.
LadyLaVeauxover 15 years ago"I'm stooping to subterfuge..." Excellent follow-up. I'm going to be late to bed and late to work. And unproductive when I get there. Once again, excellent work. Derek is definitely awesome, and Tegan give girls like me a spark of hope, even if it is only literary.
miserybusinessalmost 13 years agoi was happy that they didn't fuck right away, he just fingered her...its like you're giving us bits and pieces but its for a reason. keep it up! thanks for liking my story, btw!
mzglennover 12 years agoI love this story. cant wait to start reading the rest of it
Anonymousover 12 years agoI love it! But I can't wait until the drama starts! *rubbing hands together in glee*
Alpha_Marmover 12 years agoDerek is boyishly sexy and open. How deliciously refreshing in a character. Wouldn't that be lovely to see in real time. A man unafraid to go for it. Thank goodness for Literotica.com.
Quietmahoganystormover 12 years agoI love this story & have read it all the way through several times. It's so strange that out of all the love scenes in the story, this is the one that I like to read most.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoBut is he REALLY that awesome? He has a girlfriend in another country who sounds more on-again than off-again at the moment (regardless of how long she stays on the phone with him). Is it really that awesome of him to be coming at Tegan with the full court press? If he's not that into his girl at home, wouldn't it be more awesome of him to just break it the heck off? And THEN fool around with Tegan? He's making himself look badly to his friends, and his ex-fuck buddy who perceptively(?) calls him Mr. Monogamous has already called him on his double-standard behavior, but apparently he's a "grown man" can "do what I please" and she's "just bitter because that doesn't include you."
Oh, yeah, he's awesome, alright. The kind of awesome that a nice girl like Tegan can probably do without. She deserves someone better.
I wonder if I'm supposed to continue to think he's a great guy, or if everyone else will discover the creep he actually is. Seriously, what woman in her right mind would think he was great if he was her boyfriend cheating on her with some chick he just met in NYC? Even if said chick is a really nice chick?
