by pj
All it reinforces is that mom has to please the daughter and that the daughter can do anything she wants and not be punished for it....furthermore, why is not eating string beans wrong?
the ones above no nothing about bdsm good job at writing a master slave with child story the mother should have been punished becuase she tried to please the child my advice is if u do a second chapter have the mother punishing the child for not listening even if it may earn her another punishment
This is merely a plan story for a child to achieve complete control over her mother by having her punished at her whim. There is no lesson or anything else to be learned by misbehavior by the child.
What a sick menage a trois we have here. Daughter behaves like a typical kid, so mom gets "punishment." I truly do hate stories on this site that involve children, even if this one does so in a non-sexual manner. Still, the child's behavior is the cause for the effect. Creepy and sick. Makes you think BDSM is filled with freaks, even though it's not.
You're one of the best bdsm authors on the site. It's always a pleasure to see what you'll come up with next.