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great addition
I am soo glad you added another one this one was good to and thank you for having him stop her.. I know he loves mira and she him it wouldn't have seemed right if he let the girl do that..I love this story it is original and lovely hope for more soon..
I WIN!
Hahahah I WIN! I'm the first to make a public Comment...
and you made another story befoe my bday! lol. COOL LOOK you have 20 more days to write another chapter or two... or three! hahahaha Love the story, and awww he didn't cheat on mira...i'm telling you, mira and him are going to work it out, dont argue with me missy. End of story! lol
Can't wait for the next
It's a wonderful story
I love this plot. Can't wait for the next.
Love those vampires
Don't you just love those honorable honorable, tortured monsters? You always create such layered characters and Rillan is no exception. Good job!
*Applause*
You definitely know how to make a girl's heart ache for the pain that he suffers. I'm so glad that you are continuing with this story. Its amazing!
What a delight
You are a gifted writer and entice us with you each page of the way.
WOOHOO!
lol. This was a good chapter. Its sad that Rillan had to leave Mira behind :(..... but im sure it will be good when ever he returns home to her ... hehe... Please hurry :D
keep it coming!!!
I said it before and I'll say it again, you write as well as Ann Rice and I'm addicted!!!
Love this story.
I just stumbled upon this work of art and I must say. This is the first time I have delved into erotic horror, even after years of reading on this site. Your story is absolutley captivating. It's like you have this knack for not disappointing but also keeping it your own story. I've read most your stories and I must say the good and dark points of it are just amazing. Keep writing :)
lol
i love this story, i keep rereading it, but the last part i would have just been like "he's gay" and walked away. haha
Whew
I would have started foaming at the mouth if Rillan hadn't stopped her. I'm not sure if it's an inborn male thing or if it's how I was raised, but the idea of cheating makes me crazy. It's good to see that Rillan is as good a man as I believed him to be. :P
nope, I agree
Archangel, I'm a guy, and I agree with you: I hate cheating. It doesn't matter to me which person is cheating, because it disgusts me regardless.
grrrrr can't stop reading
well I need to stop even though I CAN'T I love this story... But I need to clean up lol
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