by libidinal
And erotic. Still, I think you should add some guilt in the wives or show how the husbands deserved this.
A nicely-paced story, keeping the action alive for as long as possible. So many writers are of the 'Wham, bang, thank you, maa'm' type, but this one was satsifying in stretching out the action for as long as possible. Maybe tyhe ending was a little abrupt, but endings are always difficult. I liked the dirty talk that stimulated the participant. Good length too, the shorties that just fizzle out are a waste of time - my 'Adultery on the High Seas' ran to 17 pages!
Keep it up, author - in more ways than one!
Shows that the man haters are in tall cotton. ... There's no need for love or remorse. ... When you're a slut
A new experience..Always a nice experience to try it differently.
Thanks for this exoerience