All Comments on 'Fun with Dad and Big Brother'

I liked the animalistic nature of the sex in this story. I hope there is a continuation as there seems to be plenty of potential.

This will keep her out of trouble for a while.

damn your stories are still making me hard

REally, enjoyed it. I'm mighty relaxed now,,thank you!

I have gotten some private comments about her breast size. It is actually a typo that i didn't recognize when I wrote the story. It is supposed to be 38C instead of 28C. Sorry for the confusion and thanks for all the great comments. Keep reading and I will keep writing.

sexygirl76

I thought it would have been nice if Dad had not come on to Crystal quite so roughly but then he was drunk and mourning his wife so it can be excused and she accepted him very graciously. A really hot tale of incestuous love. Nice to read about it and nice to live it. Fucking one's father and brother is a wonderful privilege and joy.

Hot, but...does the father's name change from Joseph to Joshua at some point. I was--distracted--so maybe it's just me.

MMMm sexygirl76 you write sooooo hot! My cock is still throbbing for you. Have you experienced this with dad and brother? Just wondering....you are a hot baby girl. Keep writing as you'll only get better. Thanks for sharing your talent

u r amazing.u made me cum so hard.i wish i cud be so lucky like crystal.u shud write more cuz u r really good gal!

what a hot and sexy story. I can't wait for more. I'm totally jealous of Chrystal - I sure would love for my daddy and my brother to fuck me!! At the same time like that would be even better!!

You have a great way of pulling the reader in, one thing you have to watch though is that you misname your characters. One moment the father is 'Joseph' the next he's 'Joshua'. Even small details like that can pull a reader out of the story as they get confused about who's who.

It was soooo HOT I was wet from start to finish. So much so that I wish that was me in the middle of the father brother sandwich. It made me cum at least twice while reading this story. Keep up the good work of writing stories like these. The only that kinda confused me was the name of the father but other then that it was fantastic story to read over and over again.

this is one of the hottest stories Ive ever read. Chapter two please?

please add more chapters to this story and add some more characters to it please.

It's great when a girl like Chrystal is getting fucked by a couple of big hard family cocks, her daddy's cock and her brother Peter's cock. Father and son can egg each other on, like, "Hey, dad, slam your big prick into your baby girl's cute little cunt! She's loving it!" and, "Boy, that's your own sister's pretty little twat. That's where your cock belongs, son. I want you to blow your brotherly balls right up there!" Chrystal's in her glory, getting the shit fucked out of her by the two big family cocks. Her brother and her daddy are going to keep her sweet little slit flooded with all the creamy semen from their loaded family balls, her cunt's going to be family-sperm clogged from now on.

Great story and very sexy. Thanks for sharing with us all.

In the first page the dad's name was Joseph. But on the second it was Joshua . Which one is it?

Loved it! Had me rubbing my clit like a rampant whore

...it's an erotic work of fiction, does it matter? Besides, are we getting off or getting a grammar lesson? ;)

my daughter is 22 so she is no virgin but i would give anything to have her like that

Umm...wasn't the father's name Joseph at first? However, it was a very hot story! Made me cum so many times while playing with my pussy. ;)

But this family has a wired way of dealing with grief.

You mean weird...

Hope I too get to fuck my young and beautiful daughters

It sounds like they have been waiting for so long for his wife and their mother to "leave"......

Loved it when her dad tells her that her mother - who had just died a few days earlier - was never as good as her. Would have loved to read her reaction to that.

I was hoping for a double penetration

Loved it , reminds me of when I caught my son with his cock in his lil sisters throat,he 16 she 12 stood n watched for a bit,cock got hard so walked in stripped n said can I play too? Scared em n said I guess,walked over n slid my rod in her mouth while son eased into her lil pussy,she said I'm not a virgin daddy,lost that 3 months ago with Jay so we fucked the rest of the night,he went to bed I did too but she followed right behind me n we fucked some more