brevity, at times, can be the soul of creativity, and in this case you got it right! An excellent little gem of a truly short story. Now I am going back to your site and reading some more of your tales.
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Anonymous06/17/08
Oh wow!
That was just too good. I had a nice chuckle at the end. :)
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Anonymous06/17/08
Oh wow!
That was just too good. I had a nice chuckle at the end. :)
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brevity, at times, can be the soul of creativity, and in this case you got it right! An excellent little gem of a truly short story. Now I am going back to your site and reading some more of your tales.
Oh wow!
That was just too good. I had a nice chuckle at the end. :)
Oh wow!
That was just too good. I had a nice chuckle at the end. :)
Fun Read
Fun Read!
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