All Comments on 'A New Guinea Pig'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 16 years ago
a good start to an interesting story line

I hope that you will follow up with the next chapter soon.

I think that you have the young lady, just where she will do anything that the doctor will tell her to do.I was wondering if the enema had some sort of slow acting drug in it that will take effect later on that day,with the good doctor making a house call? Any way a good post,Thanks.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Where is the rest of it?

Terrific story although a bit of good old fashioned parental style discipline would have added something.Shame it wasn't much longer.

verbicideverbicideover 12 years ago
Ludicrous

Date rape drugs are generally water soluble and pass through the system quickly, that's why rapists like them (unlike drugs that bind with other tissues and can be detected months down the line, like marijuana or other drugs with THC), but, since our heroine went to the doctor early enough for them to be detected, they can also be identified. A trip to, and test by, her personal doctor, who is likely ethical, would "out" the clinic doctor as a predator. While the "she said, she said" nature of the challenge would not result in a loss of license or criminal charges, the second test would allow a legal challenge to the company firing her.

Of course, I suppose the heroine could simply be an idiot. That would explain her giving in so easily to blackmail.

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