All Comments on 'My Best Friend? Ch. 02'

the worst story of a sissyboy of a writer and a husband i ever read.wrote like a bi bitch guy or a lesbian.

My god what a fucking loser you must be. Really you show through in this trash. There is absolutely nothing erotic here.. all this story does is make the reader want to kill all the people in it... and you, the pathetic author.

how nice to have such good friends to keep your wife entertained while you secretly watch or jerk off or, eventually, be forced to suck their dicks too. Why not kick you "good friend" Seth in the balls and tell him to fuck off and then go after the others one by one. Having taken care of them, just shove your wife out of the door and tell her to go see her "best" friend(s). G.Belgium

just come out of the closet? the husband just wants his friends cocks in his mouth and in his manpussy.

*sigh* yet another man using a woman to hide his homosexuality. sad!

Another punk story, sorry but this is just not erotic, just sad.

loved it

This series ranks down there as one of the worst on this site.

story. Dave lets himself be cukoled by his Seth and his so called friends. Does the man have mental problem of is he really after Seths and his buddies cocks. Is he a closet fag?

Man if you have to write a story with lots of fucking in it can't you just write about a whore. Well actually the wife is a whore, Seth and his buddies are creeps and Dave is a closet cocksucker...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

this crying and bitching by making asss w/o a name have an e-mao; site that is real so we can fill it bitching back at him?

Your writing is good but the story line is crap. He's married to a whore who is a slut for his best friend Seth, and his other buds (Greg, Warren, Brian, Steve, Pat, and Mule). With a wife like Jen and friends like these guys and he can't decide what to do. Just maybe he should get on his knees and suck cock next to his wife while she entertains his/hers friends. Sounds like she want to fuck anyone and have hubby around to pay the bills... What a pair of losers!

make her even more a whore. If ass w/o a name knew it was a cuck story why the fuck did he read them. Oh yea he's an ass!

The "writer" has zero talent for telling a story and will never improve.</p>

I continue to be astounded at some people’s ignorance on the subject of anonymous posts. At this point, I have to conclude it must be purposeful. Listen, people don’t bother to log in to write comments because it serves no purpose. “Anonymous” is no more, or less, anonymous than “mickiechickie98,” “gooberslober01,” “oggbashan,” or "wantwitchywoman." Every single comment on this story has been made anonymously. None of those logins impart any more true information about the poster than does “anonymous.” What is so hard to grasp about that? Unless the poster actually writes down their Christian name, followed by the surname given to them by his or her parents, along with the poster’s address and phone number, then it’s ALL anonymous. Get it? It must really suck to be someone who can't understand simple Internet principles!</p>

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If he ever gets the balls to take a baseball bat to Jen, Seth and the rest of his "friends" let me know. I give up on reading to see it happen. Reading this crap gets ulcerous afte a while.

the Ct. Yankee

Constructively - The last several years have seen a change in readers here. Prior to a year or so ago a writer like you could write about a watching pimpish wimp self cuckster and unbelievably get an "H" for their sick absurd efforts.<P>

Now as just plane bobie will tell you that semi-normal folks way out number the sicko's like you writer. He knows that and you will by the low scores and comments you invited with this male humiliation in the latrine disgusting attempt to display your talent.<P>

These days talent isn't enough. The subject must appeal to the majority to receive a favorable score and comment. We are using Free Speech just like you are.<P>

Self disrespect is only required by those numb nuts addicted to humiliation and fortunately there aren't very many like you. <P>

So continue to waste your talent on the very few and we will respond to your need for humiliation with fervor just so you get what you want or need.<P>

Your options are numerous. Go away or change or not. Selfishly we hope you will change but that choice is yours to consider - and make.

The sex is great, but the waffling is pedantic. Either take a baseball bat to his buddies(?) or invite them all over for a gang bang...but hiding in the fucking closet is retarded. Give us a fucking break.

I would hope that you will continue this story,and let the husband get his revenge.I think it would be good for Dave to pack her bags,and when Seth leaves he should tell her that she should go with him,because she isn't staying with her husband.He should tell Seth that he was the one that made her into the slut that she is,and that she is Seth's problem now,but I don't think Dave has enough balls to do that.Well writting,enough to piss me off at her,and a good story line,,,,,,,,,Rich

Don't let the mormons er...morons get to you. If you don't like this type of story don't FUCKING read them dick-heads!

the hate Anony critiquer notes while professing love for seriously flawed stories are great. Children when you get into seventh grade you will learn that using an alias, or nick, means you are hiding your real name so you are no more than Anony/Ass just as you profess to hate. Oh, I know, you are to old for seventh grade but your maturity is still six grade and who knows one day you may mature. You look over a story, hoping the author has done something right. You read trash and realize only the one armed agenda people can like it, we will all be happy when you guys finally get your boyfriends to do that for you. Then you can quit being closet cucks wanting to suck.

dear rich - being pissed at her is kind of misplaced if you think about it. <P>

She just wants real men that she can respect unlike the wimps into pimping their ho's, watching beeg cocks and self cuckstering himself like the writer.<P>

Something hard to understand but to be sad about for those few so jadedly addicted to self humiliation.

Great stories, please continue writing...

What a perfect little wife Jen is!

Whorewife puts on show for cuck husband.