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Momma's Cock Ch. 08

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by Reuisu06/21/08

Finally!

I was beginning to wonder if my suspicions about the story had been false and the mother was just a dominant slut. ^^ Great work! Can't wait to see how this is followed up!

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by Anonymous06/21/08

Got me throbbin

Mmmmm Great read and it only sounds like this story isn't over by a long shot , keep up the great story.

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by royalrogue06/22/08

More please

I love the deep submission that this story describes, the way he is surrounded by his mother's submissives and his own desire to please her as well. I very much look forward to the continuation of this story.

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by Jarrod15906/22/08

there is a god

dude this story is sooo hot. please keep going. if i had to id fucking pay you to keep writing these stories. incest with the mom being a futa girl. fucking amazing

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by Anonymous09/07/08

Please god more

Continuing stories that are this good are rare, hopefully you're still planning on going on.

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by Anonymous09/15/08

Please write another chapter

I think we're all clamoring to find out what happens next...

As is, this story definitely has a strong ending, so I understand if you don't want to ruin it by adding another chapter, but given the success of the series I don't think you have much to worry about there. Additionally, chapters 1-8 are so hot that I don't think that even a bad subsequent chapter will damage anything that's already been written

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by Anonymous10/01/08

Time For The Payoff

Come on where is the payoff? It's time for Wesley to get his revenge. I want to see him fuck his mother up and give the freak a dose of her own medicine.

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by Anonymous01/11/09

WTF!!!

eh i absolutely loved it up to the point she a a knob.kinda freaked me out,not cool...

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by Anonymous10/28/09

Thank You GOD!

Please continue this story! I wanna know how many loads he swallows oh his mom's cum! This is the hottest story I've ever read without a doubt!

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by forceme2suck12/14/09

Please write more!!!

I can't wait to read about the cum and his anal cherry and maybe even having him choke on her cock while his girl friend watches and momma humiliates both of them. So hot.

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by wheels_0012/24/09

wtf

all that touture and you end it like that? no more words from her just as he's about to............

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by Anonymous01/10/10

7 times

7 times what i think we all know i need more fap fap fap

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by Anonymous10/02/10

Quite liked the story

Especially the twist at the end.

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by warwolf9802/13/11

Fap-tastic

God I love this! Please, I'm begging you write more!

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by Anonymous04/10/11

More She-Cock

More she-cock please. Thanks.

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by jonthelost04/30/11

momas cock

shes sic and he's no man never will be.

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by Anonymous07/26/11

payback?

Mabey start plotting revenge with other characters? This Guy's taken a truckload of shit.

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by Anonymous01/10/12

I love this story! I wish the author would write more about wesley sucking his mothers huge cock, and eating her cum!

please write about how wesley sucks mothers cock, deep throats, and eats her cum!

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by Anonymous01/10/12

I sort of feel cheated.

very sexy story. bad thing is the ending. big surprise, but wesley should suck out and swallow mother's cum loads. since she's dominant, she could force wesley to choke on her cum. The author has talent, but the ending, while wild, is a tease.

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by Anonymous01/10/12

son's that suck cock, mommy and wesley.

it is a nurturing act, for momma to feed wesley her cock. story ends abruptly. will wesley get nourishing cum to drink from mommas huge cock? unless the author is retired from the story, or chooses not to write more, we will never know. that's too bad.

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by Anonymous01/26/12

pay back

dear author.
please just write one more chapter in this story,
where wes turns from sub to dom and hits his mother in the ballocks so hard,
that when she wakes up he then dominates her for the rest of her life.

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by Anonymous03/10/12

THE BEST FANTASY!!

Please do more chapters, i cannot wait to read the next one. Very good work, scenario end writing.
It's definitely one of my favorite stories!
Thank you.

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by Anonymous03/13/12

Pondering

I believe we all want to see the development of this history to the perfection of the absolute submission of the extremely small and fragile Wesley to his absolutely oversexed, strong and dominant mother. The history doesn´t need to go forever, but it must be finished. The development of the history should focus more on the relation between mother and son and leave all other characters apart.

The chapter 09 needs to show the blowjob in all possible details, with emphasis on the bulge of her huge hairless testicles and the dimension of her enormous and intimidating penis in comparison to his small mouth and body, and the psychological impact that the boy is suffering from such thing. It should describe how he feels sucking such a huge penis in his mother´s body and how she feels having it sucked by his little baby boy. Afterwards it should describe her cumming a huge amount of sperm in the boys throat, how she screams in ecstasy and hold his head with her strong hands, how he uselessly struggles to free himself and how in the end he finishes drinking all the hot, thick sperm of his mother, to the point in which his stomach stays full and the sperm starts flowing from his mouth to the floor. The chapter should end with her taking the little crying Wesley in her caring and motherly arms in a lovely embrace, stuffing one of her huge nipples in his cum filled mouth and asking him to stroke her mostruous semi-erect penis.
The history should develop, as said, pure and exclusively to the relation between Mother and Son, and how Wesley slowly loses his sanity for the safe of the love for his mother. Eventually Wesley would try to escape, only to be punished appropriately. His frustration eventually catches up with all the emotions he is feeling, and he gives up at trying to escape, and keeps hating his life, which pleases his mother. The history should show how Wesley becomes less and less, and his mother becomes more and more, to the point in which only one thing more will break him forever.

The penultimate chapter should show the ultimate fantasy in this fanfiction, which is Wesley being penetrated by his mother. Not consensually, but through rape:
She lifts his small body as he uselessly sttrugles, and penetrates him backwards while her enormous tits bounce at his back. It should describe how her enormous penis (much bigger than a baby´s body), penetrates the anus of her own small and fragile son. How in the same way in which a son comes from inside a mother, a much bigger mother penetrates the insides of a much smaller son. In this moments all bonds with sanity are broken, Wesley is prepared to fulfill the purpose with which his mother created him. She cums an enormous amount of sperm inside him, and afterwards he willingly starts to suck her penis, and lick and drink the still spewing cum. His eyes are empty now, there is only lust and worship in them. She lies on her bed with her erect mammoth penis and he sits on it, and ride it like a whore. He screams in ecstasy, his mother hugs him lovingly and gives him one of her huge, engorged nipples to suck, while she caresses his head as a small baby. He finally sits his little butt on her equally large balls, receiving her mother completely inside him. And with this amalgamation of motherly and sexual love ( as well as the ultimate perversion), the transition is complete and the connection established, he is now the son she always wanted him to be, and he is ready to fulfill his purpose for the rest of his life.

The last chapter should be following:
A futuristic description of how things evolved since the last chapter. Wesley is now dead for the World, he only stays home and only lives to please his mother with his mouth and ass. All persons which knew him have lost contact with him. His mother arranged for him to be castrated and for his penis to be removed, he pees through a hole, like a woman. His teeth were also removed, so that he could better please his mother with his mouth. He doesn´t eat or drink anything, except his mother sperm. He lives off of it. He has sex with his mother every day. As soon as his mother is home, he starts to suck her, and to drink all sperm he can, for she cums more than he can drink. Whtever her penis go inside their house, it will be always inside Wesley. They always shower together, and she fucks him while he sucks her nipples. They also sleep together, and her penis and one of her nipples always sleep inside Wesley. Even though Wesley has adaptated himself to being fucked every day by such abnormal penis, it seems that her penis get slowly bigger, and she gets stronger. At the same rate Wesley seems to be getting more fragile. But he couldn´t be loving it more,
for he loves everything about his momma, especially momma´s cock.

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by Anonymous05/01/12

i love it

i fantasies to have like this its really awsome waiting wen would i get to have it

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by Anonymous05/08/12

Great

Seriously hot story.

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by Anonymous05/28/12

fapity fap fap

Great story! I just wish we had more time with the mother.

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by Anonymous08/16/12

Dude!!

I am so Turned on!!

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by Anonymous09/30/12

Continuation

It doesn´t seems likel that cimeriel will conclude the history, as it has been 4 years already since the last addition (and he wrote all 8 chapters in less than 3 months). Therefore I think someone should continue this history, trying to follown with as much fidelity as possbile the current historyline, and concentrating as much as possible in the humilliation and emasculation of Wesley, to the benefit of the empowerment and dominance of his mother. To the point in which he becomes nothing more than a flesh sleeve to the ever growing and veiny penis of his strong and hypersexualized shemale mother. Let the pure love of a mother be corromped, in which her huge and pulsating penis (which is bigger than the body of a baby) penetrates the body of her own baby, subjugates him, avoiding him to ever become a man, and makes him forever a disturbed weak and pathetic piece of flesh with the only purpose of nursing the semen out of her immense sack (to live off it as he swallows it) and serving his anus to her humongous schlong, with his subsequent castration and reduction to an appendice of her body, and a meaningless piece of flesh without will. And let it be so for all eternity. Amen.

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by Anonymous10/30/12

YES!

Rape his body and destroy his mind. Take all safety away and make him worthless and pathetic. Make his mother spell gallons of semen out of her huge cock and sack directly into his stomach, through his mouth. Destroy all his masculinity and castrate him, but keep him sane enough to enjoy seeing his suffering and confusion. Blast his anus with her huge cock, fill his stomach with her hor spewing sperm and start wearing him as a sleeve for her cock, as nothing else as a discardable receptacle for her sexual urges. Make a goddess out of her and make nothing out of him.

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by Anonymous12/27/12

Some of you guys really need your heads examined! The dude that has jerked off 7 times to this story needs to get out of his mothers basement every now and then!!!

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by Anonymous12/28/12

One corrupted, strong, oversexed and dominant shemale mother conceives, raises and manipulates a weak, pathetic son to use him as a receptacle for all her perverted desires. I look forward to seeing his mother ripping his genitals off to show him that she is the real man and he will never be one. She will probably modify his body and manipulate his mind in order to make him even weaker and dependable of her, to the point in which he will live only for her and feed only of her cum, and she might just let him do it. I like to imagine that everything ends, or begins anew as follows:
His mother lies on her bed, sleeping. Wesley, already insane, crawls the bed as a baby and starts suckling her humongous cock until it is erect. His mother wakes up and enjoys seeing his baby boy nursing her veiny, engorged, monstruous and motherly phallus. She cums an enormous amount in his mouth and he drinks everything he can, barely coping his swallowing with the flow coming out of her penis. After his belly gets full with the sperm of his mother, he rises, takes her cock with both his hands and guide it to his small butthole. Willingly he rips his asscheeks apart and culminate his existential purpose and his emasculation by letting his mother´s unrealistically big phallus (bigger than the body of a baby) penetrate his small boyish body. As the bulking head of her penis enters the most amazing place it has ever been, he sits and slowly takes the rest of her motherly phallus inside himself. She offers him one of her abnormally large nipples, he takes it and starts nursing on it as a baby. She hugs him with true motherly love and as his small butt makes contact with her enormous sack (taking her completely inside him) she cums as never before inside his small body. She fucks him for hours and keeps filling his body to the point of almost exploding his insides. Spent, Wesley falls asleep onto his mother's body, her motherly phallus still completely inside him. She hugs him tenderly, as his head rests between her enormous breasts, and decides to get some sleep as well, while the excitement of having her son available for life with the sole purpose of fulfilling her most deep and perverted desires dominating her mind.

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by Anonymous01/19/13

it's me again from the depths of hell

Well holy fuck this changes everything, this I now my faviorte story (yes I know I'm a hypocrite) but I have a huge fetish for Shemale/Futanari and incest. Sue is still a lousy whore who got the bad end of the deal. Timmy is Retarted ans Wes is Fucked. knowing it's a shemale I can EASILY go back 're- read and Jack off to this. it's not a deprived slutty hell bound witch of a women with big dick issues, its a deprived horney hell bound man with a huge cock that eagerly fucks children regardless of gender, her best(female) friend AND other guys. yep 5/5 for the whole series. Damn Becky must be Gaping like crazy.Oh and wouldn't it be something if Sue was Wes`s mom? too bad we'll never know. GG WP

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by Anonymous03/05/13

more chapters

please please please write more story's i beg you i loved this it was fantastic exiting story i have never read anything this dirty and hot and just amazing it made me feel SO good please write more chapters :)

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by Anonymous03/12/13

Chapter 09 in the works

Good news everybody.
Cimeriel informed here (http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/cimeri el/9043/Mommas-Cock-by-cimeriel) and here (http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/cimeriel/profi le) that there will be a chapter 09.

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by Anonymous04/27/13

Very Hot!

Loved it! What a surprise ending. Still...somewhat of a letdown. Story simply ends. Should be a continuation: Momma throat fucked him, he nearly passed out, she shot her momma cum down his throat...something like that. In other words, story seems unfinished. Overall, great job though.

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by Anonymous05/28/13

when?

when is ch. 9 coming to literotica?

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by wolf969607/02/13

Pretty please...with a cherry on top

This is an awesome tale......and I have been checking back every month if you have added more chapters or not.....please....do write this tale more.........do not be so cruel and heartless to leave it as is........5/5 ...all the chapters...5/5

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by Anonymous08/08/13

mom needs to get her just desserts

I could only stay hard and cum to the last chapter the rest only works if youre already lust crazed otherwise it just makes me want to plot every step of that bitchs gory and agonizingly slow death

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by Anonymous08/12/13

My idea for a similar erotic story

A caring and sexually repressed widowed christian mother undergoes a miraculous body change in one night in which she becomes an extremely horny shemale with an hourglass body. Everything about her is huge (her penis, her breasts, her butt, her testicles, her nipples, her lips, etc.). After exploring her new body she tries to resist to it with her strong faith, only to discover that it is too weak. She permanently succumbs to her carnal needs and becomes a sexual abomination. In a fit of deranged lust she enters the room of her own teenager virgin son (that never even held hands with a girl, let alone kiss one) and rapes his mouth and ass with her unholy penis, all the while he tries to resist her, only to find himself too weak in comparison to her newfound strength. The more she ravishes the body of her own precious baby, the bigger her lust becomes. With his body and mind permanently ruined by his own caring and nurturing mother, his sanity dies and he becomes a semi-conscious disposable garbage sex toy, to be used by his mother for the rest of his meaningless life.

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by Anonymous10/15/13

Chapter 09, please

If I had a penny for every second I spent looking for an appropriate continuation and ending for this marvellous series, I would be able to pay the debt of this country.

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by Anonymous02/16/14

....

If I were that boy I would have slit my throat in front of a police station after telling them everything that happened. Why not end your life before your mum ruins it forever. I guess this kind of sick and twisted lifestyle is just not for me. Great writing though but the length that the woman goes through is just infuriating. I just can't wrap my head around it I think this story has made me slightly pshycopathic.

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by Anonymous07/24/14

I see what you did there

At the third story I realized the scene exposing Beryl wouldn't come until the last story, but the writing and anticipation were enough to keep me reading till the end. I was aroused at some parts, but mostly turned off. Then that last scene came, and with the help of a fitting image sent me over the edge.

It was only afterwards that I realized I'd just been fucking dominated.

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