by TheDarkCloud
I really enjoyed reading this story, and hope you do release the second part. I love all your stories and this was definatly one of the best. I love how smug and in control the older brother is and how at a loss the younger is. They could not be brothers just friends and this story would be just as good.
love your blowing big brother story, any way you could turn him into a pissmop like you did gwen or jessica? keep up the good work
it's so cold,sik humiliating.U just mayhem brother's relationship. please I'm begging U for fosterbrother sake some passion,fond and more compassion .JUST I need a love . please end it good . U make me hate NEIL so fucking .MAYBE just me.NEWSTRAT
Loved how the secretary knew what he was coming back to do and then got him hard and watched. It was very sick, but very arousing!
I pictured the ass hole brother in the movie Step Brothers, you know the one that's married to the blonde girl? It made me sooo horny. Please make another story like this! :]
The Story Line Itself Was Great, But It Should Have Been More Attractive Characters(Older Brother). The Older Brother Should have Been Just A Little More Sweet & Gentle. But For The Most Part The Story Was Hot & Dirty.
It was interesting to see the downward spiral and the younger brother realizing he was turned on.
I loved this story. I also love brothers growing up and at 8-12 year olds getting little brother interexsted and down for good head jobs and nose jobs. Great story. Keep writing. I hope you get to write a novel some day. I'd love to buy it.
coulda done without the female secretary- a man in his position allowing an underling the knowledge to blackmail him doesn't seem very smart. and then to give her power over the photo and video evidence was even stupider...
if you were going for over the top humiliation- you coulda had big bro piss on lil bro and then have lil bro spontaneously orgasm w/o touching himself- his own orgasm adding to his humiliation- no matter the lil bro's denials, that he was subconsciously aroused by being a submissive bitch
haven't come across one like this
you could use some copy-editing help, but you've really got the humiliation thing going here. I loved having the secretary privy to it all. Humiliation is so much more potent when there are witnesses—and (at least if the man's not natively gay) it's that much more intense if the witnesses are of the opposite sex. Well done. I will read on. . .
"Fuck you asshole, you'll never see me again!"
To be continued...
I can't stop laughing! I love this story.
I absolutely love this story! The secretary gives it even more of an edge and I really enjoyed that addition to it! It gave everything depth and really made it that much more fantastic! Great writing! Keep it up!
Ah yes, nothing like true brotherly love. So what are younger brothers for anyway but to serve as cocksuckers and cumdumps for older brothers. It’s so convenient to have a young brother as a cocksucker if the older brother doesn’t score on a date who won’t put out. I suspect there is a lot more brother on brother sex going on than is generally realized. Horny guys in close proximity - it’s just too easy. Anyway, loved the story, especially the degradation aspect.