All Comments on 'Blowing Big Brother'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Twisted!

Now that's just taking sibling rivalry too far! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nasty brother on brother blow job

I really enjoyed reading this story, and hope you do release the second part. I love all your stories and this was definatly one of the best. I love how smug and in control the older brother is and how at a loss the younger is. They could not be brothers just friends and this story would be just as good.

love your blowing big brother story, any way you could turn him into a pissmop like you did gwen or jessica? keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
IT'S SO CLOUDY.....THERE'S NO MERCY !?

it's so cold,sik humiliating.U just mayhem brother's relationship. please I'm begging U for fosterbrother sake some passion,fond and more compassion .JUST I need a love . please end it good . U make me hate NEIL so fucking .MAYBE just me.NEWSTRAT

freemic3040freemic3040over 15 years ago
WOW

Loved how the secretary knew what he was coming back to do and then got him hard and watched. It was very sick, but very arousing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
You know who I pictured when I read this?

I pictured the ass hole brother in the movie Step Brothers, you know the one that's married to the blonde girl? It made me sooo horny. Please make another story like this! :]

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
enjoyed it

made me also want to suck, really enjoyed it......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hot, Sexy, Dirty, & Twisted.

The Story Line Itself Was Great, But It Should Have Been More Attractive Characters(Older Brother). The Older Brother Should have Been Just A Little More Sweet & Gentle. But For The Most Part The Story Was Hot & Dirty.

Znogdt30Znogdt30over 13 years ago
Great Story

It was interesting to see the downward spiral and the younger brother realizing he was turned on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

I loved this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hot!!!

This made me so horny

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
amazing

this story is so hot! Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
big brother, little brother

I loved this story. I also love brothers growing up and at 8-12 year olds getting little brother interexsted and down for good head jobs and nose jobs. Great story. Keep writing. I hope you get to write a novel some day. I'd love to buy it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

coulda done without the female secretary- a man in his position allowing an underling the knowledge to blackmail him doesn't seem very smart. and then to give her power over the photo and video evidence was even stupider...

if you were going for over the top humiliation- you coulda had big bro piss on lil bro and then have lil bro spontaneously orgasm w/o touching himself- his own orgasm adding to his humiliation- no matter the lil bro's denials, that he was subconsciously aroused by being a submissive bitch

haven't come across one like this

liqueurliqueurover 11 years ago
well done

you could use some copy-editing help, but you've really got the humiliation thing going here. I loved having the secretary privy to it all. Humiliation is so much more potent when there are witnesses—and (at least if the man's not natively gay) it's that much more intense if the witnesses are of the opposite sex. Well done. I will read on. . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
LOL

"Fuck you asshole, you'll never see me again!"

To be continued...

I can't stop laughing! I love this story.

wolfgirlbiteswolfgirlbitesover 10 years ago

awesome can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot.

Suitntie43Suitntie43about 1 year ago

I absolutely love this story! The secretary gives it even more of an edge and I really enjoyed that addition to it! It gave everything depth and really made it that much more fantastic! Great writing! Keep it up!

kneelnakedforbbckneelnakedforbbc7 months ago

Ah yes, nothing like true brotherly love. So what are younger brothers for anyway but to serve as cocksuckers and cumdumps for older brothers. It’s so convenient to have a young brother as a cocksucker if the older brother doesn’t score on a date who won’t put out. I suspect there is a lot more brother on brother sex going on than is generally realized. Horny guys in close proximity - it’s just too easy. Anyway, loved the story, especially the degradation aspect.

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