All Comments on 'The Landlady's Daughter'

A great fantasy. Well-written and hot.

Janie

..but...or maybe butt...<p>Two REALLY BIG PROBLEMS here.<p>First, I didn't buy the premise. The buildup was too predictable, too eyes-rollingly gimme-a-break. An 18-year-old maid(made) to order? Stretched the boundaries of belief for me.<p>Second, and this is perhaps a picky point: if you're gonna do anal, label it ANAL! I got to that point and wanted to puke! Just me, I know, no one else has to agree; but anal is a direct-to-toilet (harhar) for me.<p>You write well, I'll give you that; too much I didn't like to rank it higher.

The Pill ruined this story.

Since you're ripping off Lolita, should we assume that by eighteen you really mean twelve?

Tiffany sounded delightful and a teaser of the first order, but being into mature women, I kept hoping that her mother would walk in and join them.