by roticwizard
Hi. I loved the story. But it would only be 364 days between them ,,she would need to be born say the 10th 1970 and he the 11th 1971 for your dats to work . But all and all a cute story.
It would be so nice if I could give you a 100% score.
You said it was raining but he could see her in the MOON LIGHT?. That cost you 50%
Marks a story down 50% because he can't imagine rain without 100% cloud cover. Can you imagine what a freaking DIMWIT this guy is?
Here's your 100%.
it was a nice story, hope you continue. You got a couple of inconsistencies but so what i dont mind
Hate to be pedantic, but if she was a year and a day older than you her birthday would be the day before yours, not the day after....
I know it's not really all that important but it does irk some people.When you start a story by saying she's 1 year and 1 day older, you need to watch the dates.If he's born on June 10th and she's 1 year and 1 day older, she would be born on the 9th and not the 11th.Just an over site, i guess.
If sister was born on June 11th and brother on June 10th, she can't be one year and one day older. She's older excatly one year.
They have to be born on same day so difference could be one year and one day. ☺
Or if the sister was born on June 10th, and brother on June 11th, then difference would be one year and two days. ☺
But lovely !! Rubber sheets A full bottle of baby oil condoms for the back door - Bliss
and you can say that was erotic as fuck. but i got a piss fetish, and god, i was expecting an eat out session after she pissed, but he fucked her instead.
also, calculator dude, it' twelve months and a day.
(ak47)
They're 364 days apart not 366. Just saying. Great story regardless
Sometimes I sleep with my sister ( we are 23 & 19, me oldest) it's just special for us....im the bedwetter
I lost my virginity something like this aged 22. With my cousin ...17. I don't have a brother. We were in a tent. After the act I wiggled into my pull-ups he into his, & spooned all night. We woke up in our dry sleeping bag :-)
enjoyed the story, but it would make the sister one day from being a year older, not one day over.
(silliness, i know)
Older than most sibling stories, 22 and 21.
How about a second chapter
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