All Comments on 'Rose Cottage'
by shaunreagh
- 17 Comments
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI don't know how you do it Shaun. You are the greatest. Thanks for the "spin-off" of Pissed Off With Jeff (which is my favorite). PLEASE continue doing what you do!!!
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoThanks for the follow up. It's a good story though to me it seems a little rushed. Was it written more hurriedly than your other stories? Also, I much prefer the story being told in first person from the wife's point of view. What I find most erotic about your stories is the struggle--which she always loses--between her mind and her primal urges.
shaunreaghalmost 16 years agoAuthorI try never to rush my writing. Perhaps it seemed rushed because 'Rose Cottage' is only half the length of 'Pissed off'. On viewpoint: I use erotica to try out different things. I didn't want another first person approach as that's what the last one was, hence the narrator approach this time. But all you people who leave comments, Thanks. So long as they're constructive I take your points on board.
Shaun Reagh
schubbaalmost 16 years agoit's great to read new stories from you, even if they are "only" a remake
Anonymousover 14 years agoI'm not sure if I agree that it is rushed. The only thing I would have liked to see differently was a more detailed, suspenseful construction of the sex 'scenes' when they finally take it to the bed. Otherwise, the beginning and the tantilizing build-up was as sweetly arousing as ever. Great job.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoYour stories are written in a tone and style that no one else can seem to incorporate into their writings quite as well. I will read this story many more times in the near future!
Tim413413over 9 years agoauthor's first attempt at this story - ("Pissed at Jeff"?). The most important change = Hubby could not go upstairs. I'm certain the author got feedback re Pissed that Hubby was a wimp for staying in the garden with the estate agent boss. Additionally, the first version had Wifey and slob agent fucking at the window (He in very contorted positions.) whilst she talked to Hubby. The original did not have the agent/boss fucking Wifey. That was possible in this version because Hubby was disabled. This version was MUCH better.
Goodhuealmost 8 years agoShe's married 3 mos ,her husband's in a wheelchair,and she's fucking around?!
* A disgusting twat whose marriage won't last long!
* This story makes me want to hurl!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoRemake sux! Wanna try again or maybe go back to school and learn to write.
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