by dstebbins
Author is in the crux of the story right away. She/he can either go the route of using the wife's masochistic streak as a way to explore sane SM (even edgy stuff) or go the execrable route of simply beating her. I would much prefer the former.
She always cupped 1 of his balls while blowing him, then suddenly he's saying she's never done that before!?! That sort of error is offputting. Otherwise it was interesting but, of course, disturbing.
LadyJayne/QueenJayne
i also have a fetish of being beaten until my bones break and blood is drwan mmmm please write the next part...PLEASE
I met a woman once who begged me to break her ribs
She would only get horny from being punched
Love to read more
I love this story and would love to read more on stomach punch