All Comments on 'The Masochist Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Could be very Interesting

Author is in the crux of the story right away. She/he can either go the route of using the wife's masochistic streak as a way to explore sane SM (even edgy stuff) or go the execrable route of simply beating her. I would much prefer the former.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting but careless

She always cupped 1 of his balls while blowing him, then suddenly he's saying she's never done that before!?! That sort of error is offputting. Otherwise it was interesting but, of course, disturbing.

LadyJayne/QueenJayne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
C2???

i also have a fetish of being beaten until my bones break and blood is drwan mmmm please write the next part...PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
To be continued?

I met a woman once who begged me to break her ribs

She would only get horny from being punched

Love to read more

xtremepainslavegirlxtremepainslavegirlabout 7 years ago
Stomach punch

I love this story and would love to read more on stomach punch

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