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Darkness Calling Ch. 10

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/16/08

Noooo!!!!!!!! Soren can't be evil!

I had to read this twice and saw Selene's father warned her to be patient, that the vision wasn't the whole story. Whew! Soren is hot, not quite as alpha as most men in erotica are, and very fleshed out, like all your characters, but if he turned out to be evil, I'd be a daft!

Also, I read your bio, saw your website, and I love it. The blog is great, the character picturess and book cover ideas are fun, and if the new story posts will be there first, I'll be checking it out five times a day, but I'll keep coming back here to rate your work as well.

Thanks for FINALLY updating one of the greatest stories on here!

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by cantfightfate07/16/08

Come on, Soren...

Cut poor Selene some slack and show her some love! We haven't seen the soft side of him for a while, but I know it's there and Selene is just the person to coax it out. Thanks for this chapter. I'll keep looking out for more.

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by Anonymous07/16/08

finally

it seems like eternity since last you wrote I am glad you didn't just abandon this story like others have..i am enjoying this very much and hope you add more soon..

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by Anonymous07/16/08

Love it!

Love it! Finally, ive loved this story from day one! Please more! And soon! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks!!

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by DragonDreamer07/16/08

Thank You, Thank You

I'm so glad you've decided to continue with this story. I was really enjoying it when it stopped Hope you have more soon!

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by _Aine_07/17/08

*dances*

YOUR BACK! YOUR BACK! YOUR BACK!

Loved the chapter.
Love Soren.
Love her dad.
Love EVERYTHING!

I'm just so glad you're back.

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by Anonymous08/04/08

Mysterious!

Soren and Selene are both pulled by so many forces, that it is impossible to know from one moment to the next, which force will be the strongest. Passion is there between them, they are soul mates, but are deeper, darker forces driving them as well, and if so, will those forces win out over love?

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by 8mimi808/05/08

Awesome story

What a great series! The characters are well rounded and the lovin' is hot! Thank you so much for sharing your work and I can't wait to see how it all ends up! Please keep up the super work!

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by kushielschosen08/07/08

I ABSOLUTELY ADORE YOU

Omg...I cannot even begin to describe the depths of my thankfulness for finding you randomly on this website. You are truly one of THE BEST authors I have ever had the pleasure to read on this site...honestly top two (and the other one no longer posts here). SO PLZ PLZ keep it up! I know haste makes waste...but ur killing me here!

With Much, Much Love and Gratitude,

The Chosen One

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by Anonymous08/10/08

Loved It!!!

Loved It!! Please continue the story, I'm dying to know how it proceeds :-)

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by Anonymous09/20/08

Fantastic!

My heart was in my throat until I realized that the Soren look-a-like must be Soren's older brother..... I really am finding waiting on the next installment difficult. You should make this a novel. Absolutely fantastic.
More, more, more!!!

Thank you.

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by Anonymous10/01/08

Oh, man!

We definitely need more of this story!

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by Anonymous10/12/08

thanks but more pls!

you have a great gift to details although spelling mistakes are seen throughout. But the plot is incredible and I love the characters. Selene is not the helpless damsel in distress and Sorrel is the alpha male but who takes exceedingly gd care of Selene. Encore!!

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by Anonymous10/12/08

More more more

Please hanging on a cliff edge here. Bring the next installment quickly. Incredible writing.

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by Anonymous10/29/08

Plsssss.....

Pls continue the story.. Can't wait.. Thks! :)

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by Anonymous12/03/08

Hustle up!

We're waiting!!!! Impatiently!!!!!!

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by Anonymous01/23/09

Please continue this story!

Hello, I just wanted to say that I am loving your writing. There are a few of your stories that I am anxiously waiting on, and this is definitely one of them! You're an awesome writer and I can't wait until your next installment. Keep up the good work!

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by IndianChocolate01/25/09

Begging

I am so begging for you to finish this story. It is absolutely incredible!!!! It's like a movie. I'm totally addicted!

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by Anonymous03/08/09

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

It has been FOREVER. Let us know what is happening with this great story.

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by Anonymous03/09/09

such a shame

It is really too bad she decided not to write this anymore
According to her website (linked on her profile), the author won't be continuing this or some of her other stories "until further notice". That's why I give it a fifty instead of the hundred I would like to.

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by Anonymous03/17/09

noooo!

I'm so disappointed to find that this story has no conclusion. I've thoroughly enjoyed it and its originality but feel as though someone tore the last few pages out of my favourite book or taped over the end of my favourite film... please finish it...

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by Anonymous05/19/09

update!!!!!

Please update!!! Your story is so wonderful! It's hard to believe it's not on the toplist.

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by Anonymous05/20/09

When is the next one coming?!?

Love this story! Please continue. You kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Please finish it!

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by Anonymous07/08/09

please continue!

This story is amazing! Please don't leave us hanging any longer!

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by greencasandra07/23/09

Please Finish

I loved this story of yours. Please take the time to finish it. I'm hooked and can't wait to see what you do with it next.

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by Anonymous08/05/09

Cliffhanger

Awww...what's next what's next?!!!

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by mtmissy08/06/09

Is there an ending anytime soon?

I am so tired of reading unfinished series. I wish they had a tab just for completed works so people would know the end of stories instead of a cliffhanger for years.

I like your story, but am just so dissapointed in all these unfinished ones on here.

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by madam_noe08/14/09

Continung DC

Please check out my bio for an important question on the right way to finish this. Thank you to all my loyal supportive readers!

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by Anonymous09/29/09

Gaaah...

I just read a very interesting story in a perspective that's just darn fascinating and when I get to the last chapter provided - it stops.

*headdesk*

I swear, uncompleted stories just kill me when I'm looking for escapism after a bad day.

I'm happy you're publishing it, but honestly - ten bucks for a download? I think I'd rather go to 1/2 price and buy some paperbacks, thanks.

Keep up your writing, it's pretty spectacular - I just hope to read the rest of this story soon.

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by Anonymous11/21/09

WHYYYYYYY

I'M GOING TO FUCKING BAWL IF YOU DON'T FINISH THIS STORY, IT'S SO SPECTACULARLY ENTHRALLING.


grrrrr. please...?

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by Anonymous12/12/09

Your website is not working!!!!

I have tried numerous times to open your webpage but it doesn't work....

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by Anonymous12/21/09

please!!!!

So many people are waiting for your update! Please we've been waiting for over a year now! And your webpage isn't working! Please come back to literotica!

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by CowboyRT12/23/09

I hate hacks like u

The reason this story wasn't finished here is because the B**ch is selling the full story elsewhere. So she hooks us in then screws us, hoping we will go pay for the rest of the story.

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by Anonymous01/21/10

maybe,

but at least a published version would be edited.

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by LeftoverStories02/19/10

Can't wait for the next installment...

Just read your bio, and see that you're planning on continuing. So glad to hear it! Hope you get your laptop back quickly!

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by Anonymous02/25/10

eager for the next chapter

I got sucked into your story and cant wait to see what happens. Please hurry with the next chapters

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by Anonymous03/06/10

great story

Loved your story. Can't wait for the rest.

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by Anonymous03/22/10

please write more

PLEASE WRITE MORE

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by sweetpea26504/17/10

so exciting

Please. I hope you get a chance really soon to finish this story. :)

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by Anonymous05/10/10

waitng

As with everyone else, we are still waiting for the continuation. Don't keep us in suspence for much longer.

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by Anonymous05/29/10

Is there more???

This story is awesome but just curious if there is going to be more because you don't state this story on your profile at all. Please continue.

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by MaHarris06/11/10

more please

are you going to write More chapters i would love to see how this story will end.

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by katgoddess06/23/10

Really Good

Well written and thoroughly enjoyable. I really hope you intend to finish the story soon.

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by isis8107/12/10

Really great development - I love how you have neither Soran or her father as completely wrong or right. I also enjoy that also Soran acts high handed sometimes, he also recognizes some of the wrongness that he was done to Selene by forcing their marriage. Can't wait for more.

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by Anonymous07/13/10

Loving it

Please please please continue this story. Your characters show real qualitites, so I don't want to strangle them (or you) for being fake or unrealistic. You have a real gift in writing. Please share it with all of us and finish Selene's story.

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by madam_noe07/19/10

To All - Info on The Next Chapter!

As posted many times it's been impossible for me to continue this story for some time. The characters are based off a dream I had about myself and my ex husband.

My divorce was decided on 12/07 and finalized 9/08 and I thought I had moved past it. I've seriously dated 2 people since then, been in love once, and in all honesty, slept with many people.

Recent events had me unsure of how long I would live. The good news is that I can expect a natural life, and now I have things in perspective. Tonight I finally, for the first time, really truly got past my divorce.

With that revelation came the muse. I've been doing a lot of writing, and decided the time was right to continue this story.

The next chapter has been uploaded tonight, 7/19/10 and will appear soon.

Thank you all for bearing with me.

I have other stories to finish, and will write them one chapter at a time. Look for DC to be updated in monthly installments.

Thank you again to all my readers!

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by cantfightfate07/22/10

Thanks for the update.

I' m sorry to hear of all your troubles the past few years. Here's to moving forward. Stay healthy and I will be looking forward to the update of this story next month.

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by TantricMantra07/05/12

now i understand better

hope things are better for you now xxx

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by purple_stone12/13/13

Aaaaaaa!!!

This is so good!!! :)

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by superfeluously_e11/08/14

Question

Why does Soren use offensive spells against his wife when he has no idea what the fight is about??????????

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