All Comments on 'Piss Whore'

I would have loved to be at your party !!

ever since i read that the first winner of american idol said she peed in the showeri have wished i could be there, glue my mouth to her pussy and drink every delicious drop. hopefully this would make her cum and iwould suck and swallow every drop.

Anyone who thinks a woman wrote this is out of their tree.

Terrible story.. I can only assume this was written by a pubescant boy.

That was horrible and that was torcherous to that woman

1. whore give it away (gives)

2. going to the local sym (gym)

3. do the stair master (StairMaster)

4. Once I get home I go to my web site (website)

5. special requests, or any pressing maters. (matters)

6. anything else she want (wants)

7. I am a Piss Whore and his is my 21st birthday adventure." (piss whore) (this)

8. my ass whole (asshole)

9. garter belt and fish net stockings. (fishnet)

10. I told (him)not to clean the men's room

11. and to hang (an) out of order on all but one of his stalls.

12. be the bars fuck toy (bar’s)

13. When he filially finished (finally)

14. I could only imagine how this would fill. (feel)

15. bitch hit my pussy has hard (as)

16. The first 15 was bad but the last 15 blacked me out. (were)

17/ fat ass on my face and not let me breath (breathe)

18. my as was taken by every man in the bar (ass)

Yeah, it was only an okay story, but 3 of anonymous' 18 mistake notes were debatable.