All Comments on 'Only You Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Amazing,,,,

That was amazing. Tegean is going with Dereck to L.A. that is great. i Know she is taking abig leap but honestly she needs it. she needs to be with him and experience life with him because there are still so many things that can come between them and that are standing in their way of being a REAL couple. Loved this update. I already want another chapter. Great work.

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 16 years ago
Glad Tegan's taking the leap but...

Derek totally needs to fess up about the exes and admit that she means something to him. So far Tegan is doing all of adjusting. It's time Derek does something for her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Derek, Derek, Derek

Why doens't he tell his friends that he really doesn't want to sell htheir company. Also he needs to be upfront with Teague about his past and the current girlfriend Lottie the druggie. Lokking forward to reading more. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I Disagree!

Derek doesn't need to tell her about his past. He has nothing currently going with any other except Tegan. Glad, her friends are being friends watching out for her. Take a leap Tegan/Derek - can't wait for next chapter.

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 16 years ago
I agree

If he has broken things off, why s he so worried about Teagan reaction to Lottie, he broke it off with her! I am gald he friends got her back though..I think she should take a leap, she can always coem back! Great Update, lokking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Post ? Soon?

I actually missed Tegan and Derek ... When are you going to post next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
luv it

i luv it but plz write a story 4 carrie poor girl seems so lonly

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Newness

There's nothing wrong with trying something new, every now and again-right?

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

Just kept me wanting to read more.

SpicySynAmonSpicySynAmonover 12 years ago
I'm a Little Confused...

Exactly when did Tegan lose her virginity? I must have missed that part of the story. Because it skipped ahead to them already doing it.. Please let me know what I missed.. This is a great story and I love your characters. You always write some really good stuff...

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyabout 12 years ago
SpicySynAmon

They have sex for the first time in the third chapter, and it was HAWT!

I'm liking this story a lot. I love Tegan. Great personality and real. Plus, I had my own Lloyd Dobler fantasy growing up as well. ;)

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3.4.17 wow. so it's been a minute.

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