All Comments on 'Joined by the Night Ch. 04'

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PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 16 years ago
Intriguing

Thank you for finishing this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Love it!

Very good ending! I liked it! Cant wait for more of your stories! Thanks!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
unique and delightful

Excellent story! I really wasn't sure where you were going to take the plotline, but in the end you did wonderfully. As usual.

-- KK in Texas

GAnnEGAnnEalmost 16 years ago
Unusual! Unique! A Special Story!

This is one of your most unusual stories; unique characters

within a twisting - tantalizing shorter story. SUM TOTAL =

Another Winner from Daniellekitten! THANK YOU!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I LOVED IT!

Made me all happy inside about the ending. That Caim jerk tryin' to get her pregnant just did not fly with me, made me good and mad at 'im. You write such great stories...wish I was as good...lol "Boink"!

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

I don't know how I feel about the ending of that one. Is part of his evil still with her? Huh. I liked the whole angel v. demon thing with Josiah.

victoriabucklevictoriabuckleover 13 years ago
wow

Wasn't really expecting the ending but still enjoyed the story. You are a very talented writer with a great imagination. THANK YOU for the hours of entertainment, I have almost completed all of your stories thus far, cant wait till next installments of Alpha Bravo & Captive in Her Eyes.

ladybug71ladybug71about 13 years ago
All I can say is WOW!!!

You truly are a very gifted writer!! I loved the "Devil" vs. angel story line, but wished in was a longer story....like Alpha Bravo was. Please keep writing the wonderful stories!!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 13 years ago
Talk about getting kicked in the face!

I've never read a story that made me saw wow almost every paragraph! Let me commend you on the balls you have to bring this type of story into existence. Such a wonderful job!

When the priest is the Angel, I like screamed for real WOW!

Such a wonderful read, full of hope.

Thank you

aphroditeDDaphroditeDDover 12 years ago
Omgg

Just...THANK YOU!!!!

Exactly what I was looking for!

Your dialog is PERFECT. The

Story line is incredibly believable!

Caim is the perfect badboy!!!

LOVE LOVE LOVE EVERY BIT!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I don't like demon stories but....

You had me hooked from the get go and I Loved the ending. Thanks for sharing this story.

doddautododdautoalmost 12 years ago
Very Good!!!

Out standing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nice twist

Very cool plot twist at the end! I have been taking a bit of a break from writing after losing my father but i think it is time to jump back in. *hugs* --redgryphon

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...

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