Thank you for finishing this story.
Very good ending! I liked it! Cant wait for more of your stories! Thanks!!
Excellent story! I really wasn't sure where you were going to take the plotline, but in the end you did wonderfully. As usual.
-- KK in Texas
This is one of your most unusual stories; unique characters
within a twisting - tantalizing shorter story. SUM TOTAL =
Another Winner from Daniellekitten! THANK YOU!
Made me all happy inside about the ending. That Caim jerk tryin' to get her pregnant just did not fly with me, made me good and mad at 'im. You write such great stories...wish I was as good...lol "Boink"!
I don't know how I feel about the ending of that one. Is part of his evil still with her? Huh. I liked the whole angel v. demon thing with Josiah.
Wasn't really expecting the ending but still enjoyed the story. You are a very talented writer with a great imagination. THANK YOU for the hours of entertainment, I have almost completed all of your stories thus far, cant wait till next installments of Alpha Bravo & Captive in Her Eyes.
You truly are a very gifted writer!! I loved the "Devil" vs. angel story line, but wished in was a longer story....like Alpha Bravo was. Please keep writing the wonderful stories!!
I've never read a story that made me saw wow almost every paragraph! Let me commend you on the balls you have to bring this type of story into existence. Such a wonderful job!
When the priest is the Angel, I like screamed for real WOW!
Such a wonderful read, full of hope.
Exactly what I was looking for!
Your dialog is PERFECT. The
Story line is incredibly believable!
Caim is the perfect badboy!!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE EVERY BIT!!!
You had me hooked from the get go and I Loved the ending. Thanks for sharing this story.
Very cool plot twist at the end! I have been taking a bit of a break from writing after losing my father but i think it is time to jump back in. *hugs* --redgryphon
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