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Anonymousover 15 years agointeresting
for a start. Needs some work to make it better with a smoother story flow. Keep writing.
Anonymousover 15 years agoDon't give up your day job.
That's probably a cute story buried in there, although there are several places which simply make no logical sense. But worse than that, the writing itself is, to be kind, "poor". Learn to write. Buy a dictionary. Get an editor.
-- KK in Texas
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