All Comments on 'My Story Ch. 2'

First off I'm a girl. I read these stories more for ideas for my own and possible things that my fianc? might like. This story was amazing the plot was actually quite believable. Only one small problem, don't let spell check do it all. Read it over yourself. Having a friend read it over as well can improve your story. Otherwise this story was hot.

i would love to have a lover like you

I'm afraid I can only rate this as a mediocre story, it sounds like a straight girl writing a sappy romance novel about gay men. I mean really - "I could feel myself approaching bliss and in the distance could hear a voice saying, "Oh Taylor, yes Taylor, fuck me. Fill me with your glorious seed.""

i loved your story. it was sweet and loving and that is my kind of stuff! great job! im looking forward to reading more by you

I came so hard reading this story... The end was just unbelievibly romantic.. I wish I could have a night like that with a man like that. too bad the perfect man doesn't exist :(

This story was amazingly sweet and I LOVED every single word!

you so have a way with words..I wish I could spend a night with u too lol. I absolutely love this story, hope u write lots more and soon

Nice story until the end. He may have been in lust but not love. I can fully understand that he realizes he is gay. That happened to me after I sucked my first cock.