All Comments on 'Tom's Trial'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
part 2

i hope there will be a second chapter on this one, love to see what happens with the family.

thanks sarah

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Step-daughter needs...

You need to somehow trick the step-daughter, tie her up when her Mommy is not around, and make a Mommy out of her, maybe using Ectasy so she doesn't remember anything....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Lovely !

I do like a good teaser and she really is good . More please .

zarathustra7zarathustra7over 15 years ago
Resolution

This one really needs to be resolved. Divorce, murder, polygyny are possibilities, but your devious mind will come up with another. Keep it up, you're good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Leave It

Perfect ending to one of the most erotic stories I have read in awhile.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
He's Fucked!

In story he seemed a little passive and weak, when daughter gets bored he is history, he needs a good ass kicking for fucking up his life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Agree With The Post Below....

This guy is TOAST! I just can't believe what an idiot he was portrayed as in this tale. I've seen lemmings with more self preservation instinct than this fellow has. He needs to wire himself for 'sight & sound' when he's going to be around his darling daughter-in-law. Good luck pal....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
love it! Claire is hot hot hot!

I want to see more of her getting her way with her "father" hehe! Claire is sexy!

sassysasha89sassysasha89over 13 years ago
Continue with the trial!

Love the whole thing! What does she plan to do with the video? I hope you continue this story. If not, continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice

Good story. You should continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Agreed.

Very very hot.

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiabout 11 years ago
Nice.

Interesting, good pacing and hot situations. Deserves a continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love the scene at the restaurant

also when she put her foot in his lap in the presence of his wife

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

A conniving daughter is not a story I prefer. Couldn't get through half a page.

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