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excellent!
I am so glad to read another addition to this story. I love the conflict and the affection between the main charecters. Well worth the wait. Thank you!
MORE NOW PLZ!!!
PLZ PLZ PLZ keep this story coming!!! You don't even know how much I'm loving it right now! The characterization, the plot line, the world, just everthing...sheer perfection! You gotta keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story line!
I'm so looking forward to the rest of this story! Please, keep it coming!
waiting!
Okay I can't wait for you to finish it!! I'm really anxious to know the rest of the story its so good! Please continue!!
wow!!!
holly wow!!! that story was amazing!!! please don't let it end there?!? i love it!!! you should totally get it published when you finish! i would buy it and i know like 10 other people who would too!!!! omg that's like ... i can't even put words to it! dood keep it up!
~chi~
Pls continue this story!
would love to hear this story continue. Thanks for sharing!
More Please!!
I just love this story will you finish??
Thank you for a great read!
amazing
I love the story line and how it's progressing.
my mind is swirling!
as a very loyal and faithful wife, deeply in love with whom i honestly believe is my soulmate, i just could not fathom loving another, sleeping with another or feeling the same about another man. not in this lifetime anyway.
the idea of being shared between two soulmates feels.. heartbreaking. she has so much strength - i don't think i could do it.
but i am human, so is my husband and he, unlike the fey, is quite a possessive and jealous man.
A bit too much sex
I get that this is a site for erotica... but do they *have* to fall into bed (or to the floor, or gainst a wall, or whatever) everytime they see each other?
They hardly do anything else, except exchange a few words of wisdom when they're done. I think that's just a tad boring.
Sorry.
To Jhyr
Too much sex? *sigh* this is literotica, it's an erotic story...duh. If it bores you, why keep reading? Seriously, stop leaving these stupid comments on my stories. If you don;t like them, it's simple: don't read them.
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