All Comments on 'Brotherly Love Ch. 09'

by Myalyn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
need more

The best and getting better.Keep it comming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
MOREMOREMORE!!

THIS KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER! I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I cannot wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
You haven´t learned your lesson yet!

What´s the problem with you? Your female character is an consenting adult so I don´t see how anyone can be her guardian? If there is money involved there are certain rules before she can get into it but otherwise - you need to do a lot of thinking, Myalin.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Re: You haven't learned your lesson yet!

Apparently this is a universe where you are still a child at 19.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

The quality of the writing is good. The situation only makes sense if you subtract 3 years from their stated ages.

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