All Comments on 'A Trip to Lustyland'

by AnalAnnie19

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Lustyland was clouded this day

Dear AnalAnnie19, the jest of your story was excellent the whole idea and the scene conjured up left many questions, was this all a daydream at work, a dream at night or an actual occurence that took place. The running on of thoughts to begin with found confusing and hard to follow,when posting on the internet or in this type of format break them up a bit more so that they are easier to follow. Thank You for sharing this story and I hope you write more for good ideas can become stunning rewards for others.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Lovely

Fantastic read, Annie. BTW, can't wait for the next installment of your story with you and Jenny. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good

Enjoyed it but thought the other two stories were better

jimmyjoycejimmyjoyceover 15 years ago
Good and stylish

I liked this a lot. You found a way round the usual porn cliches. Great style. The office headlines device is clever. I also liked your/the narrator's insecurity early on: it's funny but real as well. And my favourite line was: 'She's fucking me from behind – in the behind.' Funny, cute and sexy. I hope your behind gets plenty more of the same. And I'd like to see more of your writing too. - jimmy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
So well written

Right on the button Annie, different from, but just as good as your earlier tales. Beautifully done - loved it. Going to go away and put something up my bum and masturbate now, probably to Annie's First Love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Beautiful and poetic

OMG, this is absolutely wonderful! Erotic and tender, lusty and loving. You hit it right on the head, girl! I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wow

What a great story, so well written. I think this is the shortest story to ever make cum. I love your other stories as well, keep them coming!

Robert_NotRobert_Notover 13 years ago
Wonderful

and original and funny and sensual and rather erotic! R.

Betty18Betty18over 13 years ago
Positive Writer

Annie is such a positive writer. If U ever want to be left with a warm and Happy feeling - read Annie. If U ever want Ur Pussy to be left with a Warm & Happy feeling - read Annie.

Love & Kisses,

Betty18

Be Naughty

fddb410fddb410about 12 years ago
loved it...

sweet,hot, and sexy :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yum

Very very .... Mmmmmmmmmmm ... Argh .... Sexxy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great

This was deep...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Very exciting and well written! I orgasmed while reading your story. Thank you!

kimberlyannkimberlyannalmost 9 years ago

Thanks Annie, enjoyed it very much!

auburnginaauburnginaabout 3 years ago
Beauty indeed!

This is such a beautifully crafted story! I love the way you modulate from the opening stream-of-consciousness to more conventional prose narrative...as well as the erotic power that comes across throughout. And the "orgasm for my soul" at the end: perfect!

rosepolrosepolabout 2 months ago

Thank you so much for this delicious story that invites reader participation.

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