All Comments on 'Recovery of a Hero Ch. 07'

This is a sweet little story. It doesn't really deserve 100 but it deserves more than 75.

This is a fine tale! I really am enjoying it and look forward to the rest. Keep up the good work.

A lot of fun. Don't forget to let us know if the CPS woman

was just doing her job or if there were evil manipulations on the program. You know it seems strange to me that Dar's real family had not found some way to bring him home.

This is a great story. My wife and I are both hooked on it.

Quoted from the story:

"Uncle Dar said, "No. Your (you're) coming to (too). I'll buy dinner for us so you don't need to cook and do your school work too. Besides, after all that work you did for Sally's home coming party, it's only fair you get a break too."

Please, find a good editor/grammarian so we can better enjoy good story telling.

Thanks,

de Jay

In the beginning, this series showed promise. Alas, it was not fulfilled. Terrible story line kept getting worse. Obviously not edited. The one thing we can be thankful for is this author has not submitted another effort for many years.