All Comments on 'Mother and Daughter'

I'm not being cheeky but you need to learn to write in English or get a proof reader!

when you said you weren't a writer.... what a waste of time.

Just give up, you aren't going to make it. And I don't hide behind anonymity.

sad to hear that was ur best time w females, but i have to admit u had 'stayin' power. wy'd u have to go at 5?

gidgett..did she surf too golly gee..what an asswipe

Having your story checked by an experienced writer is needed before you submit any more work.

I am surprised that this git past the moderators.

Peter

I couldn't get past the first 2 paragraphs. Please get an editor before your next submission.