All Comments on 'Driving to Sarajevo'

by Tzara

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AngelineAngelineover 15 years ago
There's even poetry in a Yugo!

And that is the sign of a real poet: someone who can make even a Yugo poetic!

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poem review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum. Merci for the read!

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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That first stanza... oh boy, I'm right there with you.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 15 years ago
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If your mind only stayed in one gear you would never be such a great poet

Victoria_LucasVictoria_Lucasover 15 years ago
Yeah!

Maybe the E stands for envious - which describes my mood right now. Congratulations!

normal jeannormal jeanover 15 years ago
another excellent piece

from you. Tz, you never disappoint, I was thrilled to see you finally got the E that you have deserved many times before.

Keep up the awesome work!!

NachthexeNachthexeabout 12 years ago
"I thank the ghosts"

bravo! this is marvelous!

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Made me feel the well done, even after decades of use they're shiny as new, springs of the car seat with the stuffing long, already after some years of half the country being co-drivers, gone.

I listened to the flutter of the brother nation made sticky tape surrounding the rifty fuel line marking the route, just in case the map is a liar.

No understanding of the man on the radio but who cares as long as every other passenger laughs.

Don't you love travelogues from Wild Europe too?

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

So much said in so few words.

Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54about 3 years ago

I remember the Sarajevo Olympics and what happened there later makes me year up even today. What an incredible tragedy ...

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